Morning Saga-II

time travel

View from window was all picturesque as tree touching over sky make a horizon view. And sun reflecting between them looked someone peeping with touch. Some clouds over the sky slighting moving make Steve to  think something.

He took his laptop form the table in front of his bad. He flipped up the screen and pressed the power button with slight push.

Blue light raised. And screen started flashing. Window started computing while Steve gazed thought window.

He checked his task manager. Which said, Today he had one appointment with Miss Alisa, his class mate, and so called astrologer, or perhaps more than that.. he checked his mail ID, There was nothing in the mail that. He looked at watch which said, it was 10.11.

 It was time to take a bath. He put the laptop a side to table and pulled down his towel form wardrobe. It was cool as water drops were almost ice like, with slight shivering, he took the bath and a new day began.

 

 

 

Reviews

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Nice description of the morning routine! One suggestion I have is to have slight hints forecasting what is to come for Steve. Perhaps include some of his thoughts as well. How does he feel about the appointment?





On a side note, this could use a lot of proofreading as I am seeing a lot of typos. Once thing that helps is doing something else after finishing the chapter, then going back to it to look it over.