Yes, I Married a Rape Survivor !

This poem are the words of a man who married a rape survivor and explains the situation of her after the horrible incident. She couldn't take it anymore, so she hanged herself.

I married a rape survivor

She was terrified and broken

Shaken till the last drop of blood

She can’t even face the mirror now

Now she hates herself for being a girl

Just few seconds had stolen her identity

Her respect her pride her value her existence

Corner of a room was now her place

Tears dried heart soaked smile disappeared

Yes i married a rape survivor!

Believing i could give back her effeminacy

I hold her hands when no one wanted her

Society expelled her,Why? Because she lost virginity

Because she lost her dignity

Because someone forced her played her

Because someone snatched her feminess

I don’t care, i love her and i promise to take care of her

I will bring back her pride her attitude her smile

Hoping i could take her to my world of peace

Yes i married a rape survivor!

I can’t touch her i can’t make her feel comfortable

Suddenly at night she wakes up and cry

That night still haunts her

My beautiful bud was plucked

Crushed and trampled her soul was tampered

I gave her home my family my love

Yet she resists inside of her, still her voice trembles

Still the cruel eyes of world poaches her

Still the comments of anyone shatters her

She tried a lot to move on but that cruel laugh torments her

But now she had her peace for she hanged herself.

Reviews

[Relic]

This very sad tale to read. A tortured soul never seems to rest for one minute.

Suicide is never the answer.

As sad as it is to hear of such a sad story, the mix of tenses and lack of commas in this poem made it difficult and a bit confusing to read and get through. Grammar and punctuation are often important.

Suggestion: If you don't know how to use commas, try breaking up the sentence.

Her respect her pride her value her existence

Her respect
her pride
her value
her existence