Pain

Major part of life is pain

A bird lay it's eggs on the nest try to keep it
safe and free
Those eggs turns out be a food for the snake
Which lies beside the tree
Seeing only the empty nest a bird will be in Vain
It shatters it's wings, shakes it head but can't express the pain

A snake lives in a small caves of rock
with all its small one
An eagle searching for the food plucks
the baby Snakes when there is no one.
Snake returns after search of food finds none of its child
It sees up the sky
It looks around, Up and down, it crawl faster as long it can
But to find it's child it can't fly

A mother knows pain of delivery
A father knows pain of getting right salary
A greedy knows pain of hungry
A rich knows pain in pressure and getting angry

Being a human with all super sense we can express our pain
Which can give some nourishment
But pain is a pain for all creatures express it or not
To a heart its always punishment

Reviews

[KWP]

Nice transference of thought to writing - pain is everywhere but life will always go on. I feel for those animal mothers you write about - heart wrenching to say the least xx

[KWP]

Nice transference of thought to writing - pain is everywhere but life will always go on. I feel for those animal mothers you write about - heart wrenching to say the least xx

[Kuldeep desai]

Thanks I am glad u have liked it........

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

INTELLIGENT AND CREATIVE!! Great work!! I liked the way u potrayed ur thoughts so beautifully!! Well done!!

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the review....... It may be creative but not that intelligent enough.....

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Its totally my opinion sir!!

[Kuldeep desai]

I respect your opinion or point of view...... And I thank you for that but I need to be improved comparatively.......

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Everyone needs to get improved... there z no limit of improving and learning.
;)

[Kuldeep desai]

Yup ur perfectly right it's been my pleasure sharing thoughts with you thank you....

[Confuser]

What you wrote comes from great insite and observance with nature and our human realm. The ending was profound to me: punishment of the heart: pain. I wrote it down. You are so correct; I feel enlighted and appreciate the opportunity to read. Thank you. Dale

[Kuldeep desai]

I am glad that you have liked it................ Thank you....

[Confuser]

I love nature; for most of my life I have lived in homes in the country, secluded surrounded by forest; as now. It is beautiful; great writing. Thank you.

[Deepika]

I liked the poem, specially the message that you've tried to present..As living beings we fight for our survival and in the process incur severe torment.

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the valuable words......