Pain

Major part of life is pain

A bird lay it's eggs on the nest try to keep it
safe and free
Those eggs turns out be a food for the snake
Which lies beside the tree
Seeing only the empty nest a bird will be in Vain
It shatters it's wings, shakes it head but can't express the pain

A snake lives in a small caves of rock
with all its small one
An eagle searching for the food plucks
the baby Snakes when there is no one.
Snake returns after search of food finds none of its child
It sees up the sky
It looks around, Up and down, it crawl faster as long it can
But to find it's child it can't fly

A mother knows pain of delivery
A father knows pain of getting right salary
A greedy knows pain of hungry
A rich knows pain in pressure and getting angry

Being a human with all super sense we can express our pain
Which can give some nourishment
But pain is a pain for all creatures express it or not
To a heart its always punishment

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I have seen birds and animals frantic for the loss of their young. A farmer wrote about the depression his cow suffered after her calf was taken away. He said she cried for weeks. I have seen birds mourn their mates and their chicks cruelly taken by our feline friends. Your poem made me think more about the loss of animals, because I know far more about human loss. Thought provoking read. Thank you.

Chris

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for reading.... Cheers

[Pradnya]

kuldeep ,
such a awesome piece of work, read it many times. being an animal lover, i loved your poem more , thanks for sharing

pradnya

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for reading... Cheers... 🥂🥂🥂

[gram linski]

This was a great poem about the circle of life, disappointment, regret, enjoyed,

[KTizzle]

Nice display of the connection between pain and nature. Pain is something that naturally occurs in life. Definitely thought provoking.

-Jazz

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for reading.......

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Kuldeep desai,
I find much to identify with between my own life and nature. Inspiration is the word. Life is deep at times and full of pain. Life is like a splashing sun washed brook at other times and we are sustained. Your poem, "Pain" shows the contrast to the realities of pain within this life we life very well.............blessings Kathy

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for your blessings.......i am glad that you have liked it...

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Yes. Your are welcome and I wish you a wonderful week..............

[andrew mitchell]

yes one cannot appreciate life without having some struggle, some pain just like when you are unwell and you can't wait to feel better.we need that contrast.

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for reading.......

[Ruth]

This is superb, all species bear pain and this really gives the meaning of such, the cycles and how some pain is a circle of life itself, the web we are all contained and held by, potent thoughts...

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you and i am glad you have liked it.......

[Anindita Janhabee]

"The best part of pain is that it produces excellent poetry..."
like this......!!!!
so nice to read the facts of this hostile world...

[Kuldeep desai]

Yeah you are right pain gives you the words which are buried under your heart.......it comes out like lava of volcano.........

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yep. But sometimes it's better to take them out rather than keeping them inside...

[Kuldeep desai]

that's why we write.......there are many things hidden to take out write.......we get an Idea which is resilient and highly contagious it either defines you or destroys you........

[Anindita Janhabee]

very true....

[wordman]

love and pain,they seem to go hand in hand..we can`t feel love without feeling the pain..

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for reading.....

[Chummy]

Pain... helps us become stronger. You're good with words, and the ideas conveyed in the poem are creative, original. Thanks for sharing!

[Kuldeep desai]

thanks for reading and you are right pain makes us stronger..........you should have courage to face it each pain will teach new lessons and provide new ideas for life.........

[Chummy]

Very true, you're welcome! Looking forward to read more of your works