Smartlove

New way of expression of love

My heart was like gimgerbread 

Android version 2.3

When i saw you,automatically it updated

to Kitkat version 4.3

You have left no space in my heart

you are my screen wallpaper

When i want to see you, i just close my eyes

you appear like screensaver

I will never hang,I will never brake 

little bit strong and little bit faster

I will be with you everytime with full battery back-up

When you are with me i don't need any charger

My RAM and Processor are the creation of god

you don't get any developer better than him 

My memory is filled with your smile and thoughts,

i want you to be my lifetime validity SIM

Facebook,Whatsapp,Twitter wherever you go

i will follow You

Don't know when you will reply

But i will be still online Waiting For You

 

  

 

Author's Note

Hope you will like it
Read,rate,review....

Reviews

[Nitesh Mahabal]

hahahaha.... most modern outlook on love by any author/writer

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you Mr.Nitesh i am glad you have liked it.......

[M.A.Rathore]

First of all love is always innocent which is governed by our heart while if it is a smart love that means it is a game of love governed by mind so plotty that it fails to facilitate the real emotion.
If it is love for smart phones then it goes down the feeling for modern mania of the foolish world busy all the time cling to it without so strong a purpose.
As for as the exposure of the poem you have composed or installed applying all the technical accessories together tells much more authentic. Though I like the most part of this poem yet the best part attracts me is the concluding stanza.
Keep writing so lovely and new imagery with modern tools..lol.

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you Mr.Rathore for your review and i completely agree with you but i have written this one just for fun sake.........

[M.A.Rathore]

Good. You shall learn all your writing jusy keeping up...

[Tasfia Islam]

hehe....wow....this is your best poem in my view....great job... :) mixture of technology with poetry... Loved it...keep it up... :)

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you.........and i too think that this one is better than others.........

[Afraa]

This is unlike any other poem I have read on here. Very, very creative!

Spectacular job!

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you..........i am glad you liked it.....

[hardeep sabharwal]

Lolz, I enjoyed this piece much, Though internet has given us much, we have lost a lot of feelings too,
a nice read here :)

[Kuldeep desai]

i am glad you liked it........

[AYVID]

Very creatively done Kuldeep. I like the novel concept very much. The writing has a very ardent and boyish feel to it. I guess love will be scripted in an all new language in our techy times.

[Kuldeep desai]

Yes you are right,love can be expressed in in all new languages..........review chesindaniki chala dhanyavadalu.......

[AYVID]

You are welcome Kuldeep :)

[ayesha gupta]

so funny analogy.. i enjoyed it.

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you............i am glad you liked it.......