Smartlove

New way of expression of love

My heart was like gimgerbread 

Android version 2.3

When i saw you,automatically it updated

to Kitkat version 4.3

You have left no space in my heart

you are my screen wallpaper

When i want to see you, i just close my eyes

you appear like screensaver

I will never hang,I will never brake 

little bit strong and little bit faster

I will be with you everytime with full battery back-up

When you are with me i don't need any charger

My RAM and Processor are the creation of god

you don't get any developer better than him 

My memory is filled with your smile and thoughts,

i want you to be my lifetime validity SIM

Facebook,Whatsapp,Twitter wherever you go

i will follow You

Don't know when you will reply

But i will be still online Waiting For You

 

  

 

Author's Note

Hope you will like it
Read,rate,review....

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

New way of loving in this techno era.... cool lines.......
loving technologically.........
nice piece again....

[Kuldeep desai]

oh.....great thank you for reading this one which is not going to make you feel sad.......After reading your reviews for other three sad ones i felt bad that those poems gives so negativity around and i am thinking right now of writing some funny ones...........

[Anindita Janhabee]

I used to think that my poems are very negative ones as I never wrote anything inspiring. But a writer friend told me "Your writing shines after its darkness... without darkness, none can see the light....so you hv a light coming after the darkness...." and those lines made me feel good actually.. that writing about darkness isn't a bad thing. It's a different thing indeed. You might have read my dark works... Sometimes I write about myself, sometimes my imaginations... but mostly I write of darkness... I don't know why but each time I start something, it happens to end with something sad......
and that's a unique thing I guess.....
so is with you...so Cheers!!

[Kuldeep desai]

oh my god.....so much maturity you have achieved so fascinating, and its so true i actually realized it now that I start something, it happens to end with something sad.........i envy you, this conversation we had actually made my day,big thanks to this site i am meeting here amazing people........i am not going to forget you anindita you are really special......

[Anindita Janhabee]

oh wow... such a big compliment to me......can't just believe it ...

[aLittlePain]

Delightful! Techno love....brilliant

[Kuldeep desai]

I am glad that you have liked it..........

[Riti Rajput]

Technical love...;p
A perfect love story of a technocrat...
Keep writing..

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you.....:) :) :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Hehe... techno-love!! Lol I liked it.. ;)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you.....

[Deepika]

Smart thinking! Enjoyed reading(y)

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you......

[Confuser]

Thought it was sweet, and kids can certainly relate too. I enjoyed it very much. Clever take on writing a love poem and the flow was wonderful. Thank you.

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for the review.......

[Confuser]

You are welcome.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Yeah, that's the new world, have seen it, been part of it, don't know if it will last. Hope this will make us better, but I am not sure of it. :) Rudi

[Kuldeep desai]

in some case it is better in some case it is worse........i have just said the best part..........in my other poem 'from outside to inside'.........i have depicted its bad impression........read it so that you can compare.....

[Coyote Poetry]

Our new world.
"Facebook,Whatsapp,Twitter wherever you go
i will follow You
Don't know when you will reply
But i will be still online Waiting For You"
Hard to hide now. I like the poem. A modern version of love and disappointment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kuldeep desai]

Thanks for the review..........i appreciate your views........

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Maskedthoughts]

I found that you used very interesting and creative imagery. I have never read a poem that related to the digital age, i enjoyed it :)

[Kuldeep desai]

I am glad You enjoyed it.................now everything has got digitalised thought of doing proposal also.......

[Prabha Salimath]

Nice and funny, you have written very creatively...

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank u........for ur review....