From outside to Inside

its poem for today's generation

Taka tuku tika tuku tatata

Chaka chuku chika chuku chahaha

It's just an sound but no meaning

who cares about that just enjoy that thing

On the way to the office if you sees an accident

take a pic but don't help him

upload in fb and see the comment

what peoples give on him

Mouse in the house run run run

oh my God you are in trouble

Take your smartphone

search rat poison in Google

Don't let kids to play outside

there skin may get burnt

give them to play video games

keep on press the buttons that don't get hurt

Don't care about the guy

who lives next to your door

make new friends through

FB,Whatsapp,twitter

lala lulu lala lulu lalala

kaka kuku kaka kuku kakaka

there is a sound but no meaning

life has updated from outside to inside

we should know what we are doing. 

Reviews

[ayesha gupta]

so true.. it was fun reading ..nice. :)

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you very much....

[KWP]

I disagree with Rene - you have a good strong clear message here - I would have to say - yes get to know your neighbour instead of blowing someone up on playstation, go and play cricket in the sun instead of hanging out with people that matter not in this life, communicate in the physical - think, breathe, feel, touch the physical - it's there it won't last - LIVE immediately .. Nice One x

[Kuldeep desai]

Wow i am glad that You liked it.......sitting here thinking that i was wrong my point of view is not correct for a moment and your comment really charged me.........thanks a lot.........

[KWP]

no worries we all have different eyes in which we view the world xx

[Rene Salinas]

Ugh! Sorry I'm not a fan of this writing at all. I have spent so many years in IT. I have a decent view into it. Nothing special just a view from someone who has always managed to help others. I see then humour in your starting lines but not my kind of humour. Here let me enlighten you in case you do not know. There are acceptable IT policies at places of work If do not comply you get a warning then you get sacked. IT is not an option any longer - is more like an imposition! Like or not you will have to comply. I agree with you as to the extent of the Children becoming alienated and of course that has nothing to do with IT as such that will be down to parenting. As for the desensitization amongst humn beings that was happening before Technology. See technology is only a tool like a hammer. You don't have to hit somone on the head! You can also just put the nail where desired.

I think I know what you meant yet it came across a bit muddled.

Thankyou for the invite.

[Kuldeep desai]

I respect your point of view,.............but today most of them are addicted to internet of course you may be of not that type but there are many people who are of this type and i have seen those kind of person personally and it's for them..........it's a fact and you cant deny it...............In our country it is happening a lot......

[Rene Salinas]

Yes but your wrting is not about Education is about the world of technology. Your response belongs to the world of education. Thankyou for the invite once again.

[Kuldeep desai]

Your welcome.......and i actually wanted to thank you for giving honest review because i have seen a person who say it is good even if they know it's bad............I hope you will read my other poems and review it so that i can understand others way of thinking..........

[Rene Salinas]

Always trying, me! But just like you I get a lot of requests so only time tells in the end. Plus I also like to write, funny that hey! (Shukriaa)

[Kuldeep desai]

this review was given two years ago irony now i am in IT and i am agreeing each and every aspect that you have written there its what they say experience is the best teacher in the world....................