Topper

Please read it.....

Daddy says"My boy you should be the topper",

He cant give me even an reasonable offer

Take 98 or 99 you should be first

I don't care what you do,how much do you suffer

you want to say all your colleague

"My son is number one"

My marks can give you happiness

but not your son 

you wake me up at 5am, 

insists me to study

you don't bother what i am,

what i want to be.

Marks is just an number

its not an symbol of Excellence

I want you to understand me

in my life i want your Presence

Hey dad don't care about the people

what they think about you

YOU ARE MY DAD AND I AM UR CHILD

YOU WANT ME AND I WANT YOU.

 

 

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

life is family and loved ones.

[Shannon]

I do not know that word, topper, but the meaning becomes clear, which is a good thing. Try "" marks are only numbers" or "a mark is just a number"?

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the precious review........

[wordman]

a dad and his son,we want better for our children,sometimes we just don`t listen

[Kuldeep desai]

You don't need to listen, Just need to Understand...........

[Riti Rajput]

A true scenario of today's competitive world... nicely penned... :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you......

[Chirag Kumar]

Simple and precise! Loved the underlying message :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you..........I am glad that you have liked it.........

[Deepika]

Good one! It's thrilling to go back in memories to those childhood days when our marks was a matter of prestige to our family :D

[Kuldeep desai]

yeah ur right.........thank u for the review....

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

This is a faur piece of work. I wud say just chck the places u used AN ...
N a good one... aaj kal kids pe pressure ko dkhte hhue..it was a nice one...

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you........

[Prabha Salimath]

At present situation this is very apt poem, I appreciate your wording in it which quiet touching to the rocky heart. I believe excellence is something which need not marks to consider bcoz it shines itself as we work on anything marks shows us but not its representative... Beautifully written....

[Kuldeep desai]

yeah all i wanted to says is follow excellence and success will follow you @@@@3 idiots......

[Kuldeep desai]

This one Actually i had written it for one of my friend who's father was falling in this category and he showed this poem to his father.......He loved it and he changed his view about his son............

[Afraa]

Very interesting poem, indeed. I don't read a lot of poems like this. I like how you took the time to write about a certain issue that a lot of children go through. *Applause*

Thank you for tagging me, by the way.

[Kuldeep desai]

Your welcome and thank you for the review........This one Actually i had written it for one of my friend who's father was falling in this category and he showed this poem to his father.......He hugged him tightly after reading and he said "Go my son choose the path which you like"....

[Afraa]

EPIC!!!!!!