IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY NOODLEBOP

Kind of silly but hope you like it ;) 07 26 14

Let's go dancing on the ceiling

Let's go to the hop

Let's hide out and light the candles

on the cake for Noodlebop

For the sweetest lass you'll meet

For a glow that makes you stop

and realize your day's been made

That's the way of Noodlebop

So infectious is her smile

So poetic you could drop

So in awe you'd be of her hypnotic words

Smart, that Noodlebop

You are loved by us you see

You're the cream of the Cafe's crop

Are you ready for a party?

It's your birthday Noodlebop!

Reviews

[s y e]

OMG!! I'm smiling like a buffoon right now and I'm completely ready for dancing on the ceiling... Bring it on!! Thanks my sweet Steveroo for taking the time to write this, it was a lovely surprise in my RR's. One I am so happy to find - thanks my sweetest friend. You're a true gem!

Thanks Steveroo!!! •xoxo•

[kublakhan27]

I'm so glad you like it bud, that makes my day :) I obviously didn't want to do something too serious haha I'm glad you like the dancing part, I couldn't write such a piece for you without some dancing involved haha ;) Thank you for your friendship Noodlebop, enjoy the day :)) xoxo

[anne]

so cute,a precious gift.....
I loved last lines....

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Anne :)

[Bill O. Writes]

I died from the cuteness of this. RIP me.

[kublakhan27]

Haha So glad you enjoyed it Willyum :)

[Sheila Kline]

Hey Happy Birthday Sweet Sye!! I hope it's the happiest and zaniest birthday yet!! This was very sweet of you Steve!!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Sheila, she deserves it :)

[Kayleigh]

How nice. I a sure Noodlehead enjoyed this one -- sweet name for her too. This was funny, made me laugh so thanks for that.

Happy birthday Noodlehead.

[kublakhan27]

Haha That's my nickname for her...I'm glad it made you laugh...thank you Kayleigh.

[Wall Hermitt]

Very humorous piece of poetry. It is evident the outstanding gesture you’ve devised, as it is easy to feel the joy your words inevitably evoke. Very entertainingly enthralling! Happy birthday to Noddlebop!

Thanks for sharing!

W.H.

[kublakhan27]

Glad you enjoyed it my friend, she deserves it all the way :)

[M.W. Griffith]

Very entertaining! It must be good if I'm still smiling afterward. :)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Glad you enjoyed it :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww Steve this was a beauty and sounded exactly right .She is a sweetheart and I am sure she appreciates this so much :)

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it Vidya, she's a ray of sunshine without question :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

True That :)

[Troy Henson]

Bravo Steve...what a great tribute to great WC member.

Regards
Troy

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Troy :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice birthday wishes, well written...

[Rene Salinas]

Nice to see representations of friendship even on a virtual space and as I don't know about the person in question and after reading Frieda take I get a little more of a view into somone that is celebrating a special day.

Thankyou Kubla

[kublakhan27]

She is a dear friend of ours...she goes by Noodlehead and she just turned 17 but you wouldn't know it by reading her poetry...glad you enjoyed it Rene.