IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY NOODLEBOP

Kind of silly but hope you like it ;) 07 26 14

Let's go dancing on the ceiling

Let's go to the hop

Let's hide out and light the candles

on the cake for Noodlebop

For the sweetest lass you'll meet

For a glow that makes you stop

and realize your day's been made

That's the way of Noodlebop

So infectious is her smile

So poetic you could drop

So in awe you'd be of her hypnotic words

Smart, that Noodlebop

You are loved by us you see

You're the cream of the Cafe's crop

Are you ready for a party?

It's your birthday Noodlebop!

Reviews

[s y e]

OMG!! I'm smiling like a buffoon right now and I'm completely ready for dancing on the ceiling... Bring it on!! Thanks my sweet Steveroo for taking the time to write this, it was a lovely surprise in my RR's. One I am so happy to find - thanks my sweetest friend. You're a true gem!

Thanks Steveroo!!! •xoxo•

[kublakhan27]

I'm so glad you like it bud, that makes my day :) I obviously didn't want to do something too serious haha I'm glad you like the dancing part, I couldn't write such a piece for you without some dancing involved haha ;) Thank you for your friendship Noodlebop, enjoy the day :)) xoxo

[Bright Ocean Star]

Kublakahn, this is fabulously sweet. What a nice thing to give precious Nooodlehead for her birthday. Love it!

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it BOS :)

[Melobldnfr]

:-D How cute! I can always appreciate such festive writes from you Steven! Xo!

[kublakhan27]

Haha Thanks so much Mel, the problem is it usually takes a special event to get such a positive piece out of me...so glad you enjoyed it :) xo

[Kenneth The Poet]

A weird, lovely piece. I like this quite so.

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Kenneth...just a silly little rhyme for a good friend.

[Enigmatic Amor]

Very sweet and cute. Happy Birthday Noodlehead.

[kublakhan27]

Glad you enjoyed it, she's a good friend :)

[Renée]

Very creative and very sweet write for the Noodle

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Renee :)

[Lune]

This is adorable! It makes me smile and sing it out load! Very nice and creative.

I really like how this flows, it has a great rhythm! Great job

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it Lune, thank you :)

[Rita L. Sev]

:) :) :) I just cannot post enough smiles for this one, Steve - not only a sweet birthday message for Sye, but a darn good rhymer, too! Admit it, you had fun with this one! ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha I had a blast writing this one my friend...I reeled it off in about ten minutes, it just came to me naturally...that's my nickname for her, most people probably don't know that ;) So glad you enjoyed it Rita :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Love it! Original, comic, fitting right in with the poem, in fact, bringing the lit candles to the party. Bravo!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Alfred :)

[Lyan]

It's cute and fun!nice job:)

[kublakhan27]

Glad you enjoyed it Lyan :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

You crafted this quite well Steve
for a sweet Birthday girl.


And I see she just loved it.


I loved the last stanza's lines.


You are loved by us you see

You're the cream of the Cafe's crop

Are you ready for a party?

It's your birthday Noodlebop!


I love that Noodle bop cute.



Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[kublakhan27]

Glad you enjoyed it Benita, thank you :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome Steve. was a pleasure to read. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet