UMM...YEAH, A SENRYU

Inspired by Jacob's Automated Lover...07 25 14

Shot another blank

Target's safe this time around

When's the next issue?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Hilarious you're a funny guy.



I loved that poem Jacob did
I remember this song from the 80's
I think it was the 80's not my favorite
but I see the humor.

thank you for sharing and your
kind review and comment you left.


Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[kublakhan27]

Haha It's not my favourite either though I do like some of their stuff...I'm actually not that funny, my writing is 99 percent negativity in a variety of forms...I'd change that if I could but it's not me, nor is it my life in general haha I'm glad this one made you laugh though, thank you Benita :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome was a pleasure to read. well I don't take much of anything personal much anymore even though I am not crazy about playboy but I do see the dark humor in this. I am quite funny bubbly person :) but you can be anything when you write I have written many silly poems. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[kublakhan27]

Neither am I (honest haha) but yes, when I do humour, it's either dark or satirical...I think this one is both :P Blessings :)

[Lydia Shutter]

I love it when two poets I admire inspire one another! So you are shooting blanks, are you? :) Smiling here. Lydi**

[kublakhan27]

Jacob's always been an inspiration :)

Don't ask haha ;P Glad you enjoyed it Lydi :)

[Matching Socks]

Lol. (Blank of what?)
I just want to be sure I'm reading it right.

[kublakhan27]

I can't say here haha It's a metaphor...let's just say, I guess she wasn't hot enough...:P

[Matching Socks]

: P

Ok, let's say that.

[kublakhan27]

Sorry, I'm hungover...welcome to my hungover imagination :P