MY SHORTEST POEM...FOR YOU

07 08 14

If you only knew
what's already been written

Author's Note

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Short and sweet. I like the poem.

Kaze~

[Kayleigh]

See this can be taken in many ways... I think I'd have a better idea if I read more of you but for now I will leave it open to ideas and all... Nice poem, less is more in this case.

[kublakhan27]

I had been holding on to these lines for the longest time...I thought for sure the would wind up as the end of a poem, but the more I looked at them, the more I started to consider them as a stand-alone poem for the mystery they evoked...I had, and still have, many ideas swirling around in my head when I wrote these lines...you probably do need to know and my writing for a while to get the full grasp of it...I'm glad you enjoyed the less-is-more approach...thank you Kayleigh.

[Kayleigh]

I think these two lines make a perfect, "short" poem and yes, sometimes less is definitely more.

[Ashira Macy]

My goodness, that was short! Haha. Full of mystery though. Sometimes saying less is enticing. It sparks curiosity.

[kublakhan27]

Haha I never imagined writing a two-line poem...I had it pegged as the ending for a poem but the more I thought about it, the more intrigued I became by the notion of them standing on their own...thank you Ashira :)

[Matching Socks]

Do tell....

Please?

:) (:

[kublakhan27]

Haha Hey, I can't be in-your-face blunt all the time, I have to be mysterious once in a while...okay, it partly is a commentary on the site ;)

[Matching Socks]

Ahhhhh. Gotcha

[kublakhan27]

I've been doing lots of 'commentating' lately haha

[Pryde Foltz]

We would all worry a lot less, that is for sure. Great write, Steve.

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Pryde.

[Rita L. Sev]

Just what is behind the curtain? What a tease of a poem, creating thousands of possibilities in the mind of the reader. This is genius, Steve.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Rita, you humble me with your kind words :) For a while, I had these lines pegged for the end of a poem, but the more I thought about it, the more I liked them on their own...I wasn't sure if a two-line poem would work but I feel better about it now haha

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem says so much.
Very clever, but gets the mind working.
Imagining all of those things unsaid here is half the fun.

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Zeitgeist, glad it made you think :)

[kublakhan27]

I think I know... for I read all of you...
But often I am too speachless.

I think this is my shortest review ever to you lol

- Elisa

[kublakhan27]

Haha It's okay, it's not the kind of thing that encourages elaborate reviews haha Thank you sis :)

Haha, but even this piece of you speaks volume, that's why I found it so good and greatly fun, you just posted it bro!! much love! xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Truth be told, I had these lines pegged for the end of a poem but the more I thought about it, the more I liked them on their own...much love to you as well sis :) xo

See? that's how poetry has to be shaped like a diamond, and it always must be~ changeble, until it's perfect. :) sometimes the most little ones, are the best... ;)

[Sheila Kline]

So few words but ones that could be a peek into a million more where others have not ventured.........to the point but oh, what a point you make!! This certainly does leave a lot to the imagination!!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Sheila, glad it made you ponder a bit ;)