FOR ANNE

03 22 14

Questa canzone è su di te

To you
Mother Courage
I extend a cigarette
of shy anticipation
I want you to seduce me
to implement your closure
on the monotone
Duet For One
Raid my loneliness
in a hotel on Naked Street
Walk The Proud Land
of maple leaf melancholy
as you would the violated daughter
of New York Confidential
I'll diffuse the wind
of my depression
for your mourning candle
and undo the changing of
your name
No longer need you be
The Girl In Black Stockings
unless of course you want to be
Yes I want you to seduce me
but not to bear the burden
of a Miracle Worker
steady as you've been
on that unenviable pedestal
In the dictum of my
infinite malaise you define
The Last Frontier
Let me light your cigarette
Louisa
with which you would illuminate
the fog of my unbridled
Silent Movie

Author's Note

Reviews

[Renée]

A Wonderful tribute to a talented woman..I am tickled you were able to mention her other movies, and not just Mrs. Robinson. I loved when she was able to show her humorous side. I also admire her and hubby for their long marriage, which shows me, they had their priorities in order. Great piece of work !

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Renee, I had all of those things in mind as I was writing this one...she just commanded respect and still does...there were a couple of signature roles that I just couldn't work in, but it turned out better than I thought it would haha So glad you enjoyed it :)

[Renée]

You did great ! my pleasure (( :

[Melobldnfr]

OMG, I absolutely LOVE this Steve!

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed this one Mel, that means a lot...this is one I hold close to the chest :)

[Melobldnfr]

Sent you a message about it.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Lovely! Absolutely fantastically brilliant loveliness! An excellent tribute that leaves me rather speechless!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Phoenix, I am truly humbled by your reaction, and happy that you enjoyed my tribute :)

[Kleio13]

"Let me light your cigarette
Louisa
with which you would illuminate
the fog of my unbridled
Silent Movie". Your`e my favorite erotic poet. I`d let you light my cigarette anytime Kub. impressive write

[kublakhan27]

Anytime you need a light just let me know my dear ;) You've made my night with your review...thanks so much.

[Kleio13]

Your welcome Kubby!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

What a great poem you have written. It is a very lovely tribute to someone of such elegance. And the movie is nice as well. As always, your pen does a lot of spectacular magic. I applaud that. Wonderful work!

[kublakhan27]

You humble me with your kind words Gleb...movie stars in her mold just don't seem to exist anymore. A lot of care went into this one in light of how large and loyal her fan base is so it means a lot to receive such a compliment :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautifully written.

Kaze~ :-)

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Kaze :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome my friend. :-)

[Zahra]

Strongly penned. Very nice piece

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much, so glad you enjoyed it.

[Bowers]

this was beautiful, a very modern idea, with great imagery, I did love it!

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it Bowers, thank you :)

[Madalyn Beck]

What a fantastic tribute you have here. Hands down, my favorite part was "I'll diffuse the wind of my depression". Nice job with this! :)

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it Madalyn, thank you for the kind words :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Great tribute... So many lines that stand out. I'm not very informed on her body of work, but after this, I will be doing some homework! Lol

[kublakhan27]

Haha Truth be told, I did some homework as well for this one...I knew about her best-known roles but I wanted to sprinkle in some of the lesser-known ones as well...so glad you enjoyed it PH :)