KHAN'S BLUES

KHAN'S BLUES

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Not a single messenger
of solid clarity is safe
beneath my senses

The most trivial of visual
acknowledgements
shrivel windows into
nominal extinction
before me

Poor Winter windows
sentinels of colour gone stark
I'm afraid I must
declare you all mirrors now
tethered in the wayward
blisters of an inconsistent rain

Poor Winter poles
all your schoolyard tricks
of adhesion will be numbed
by the leather of my chapped lips
while my eyes blur your icy
emblems into epitaphs

© 2014 kublakhan27


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"I'm afraid I must
declare you all mirrors now
tethered in the wayward
blisters of an inconsistent rain"
These lines make me think of someone I used to know and hate. Someone who I thought I loved. that is just a reflection of what I abhor . Nice write Kubby

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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Well, it isn't an ode to the carefree idylls of childhood to begin with my friend. This was written.. read more



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Poor Winter windows
sentinels of colour gone stark
I'm afraid I must
declare you all mirrors now
tethered in the wayward
blisters of an inconsistent rain
Brilliant writing my friend. The chill of winter can make even the most positive person feel a little melancholy...
:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend :)
Poor Winter windows... I'm afraid I must declare you all mirrors now...

This concept struck me. You want to look upon the outside world, perhaps even join in, but Winter has kept you bound, so all you can do is become introspective, seeing what you already know is there... A deep write, Steve, and one that many can relate to this time of year. Remember that Spring is always there, waiting...

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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

I had much in mind when I scribbled that down my friend...I've hardly been in an upbeat state of min.. read more
Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Believe me, even snow has its limits as far as being inspirational... Tons of snow still on the grou.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Yeah we got another storm coming through tomorrow, and of course it would come on my payday when I h.. read more
My friend, you seem locked in a winter'd state of mind. Love the pole and adhesion reference...schoolyard pranks gone awry. This piece feels a bit delicate to me, like one of those icicles I know must be dangling from the eaves of your place. They are beautiful, but when they fall, splintered into so many pieces only to melt back to where the had come from and probably start all over again. When winter comes my friend, and comes hard like it does in your part of the world, we all become those icicles and we all eventually fall...but spirng is on the horizon and soon we too shall melt and re-start again the process of watching winter waving in the distance. Very cool Steve. I got a chill reading this one.

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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Quite possibly the most moving review I've ever gotten my friend...I thought I was going to well up .. read more
Now I know that this is not about my Steveroo.... Actually, I lied, I know it is about you bud. I loved the wording in this one, you've written it from you heart and threw all the emotion in to it.

I do hope you feel better soon, my friend!

Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Yes you know me well Noodlebop...most of what I write is fairly personal but this one was defin.. read more
Oh those winter time blues....sigh!! Let's go someplace warm.,..lol!! ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

I'll sit in front of the heater and close my eyes, and imagine I'm somewhere warm haha ;P
redflutterby

10 Years Ago

Lol... be careful you dont burn yourself now!! ;-)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Hahaha Nah it ain't that warm ;)
Somebody's not feeling it eh? Love the title, sounds like it could be a blues & jazz club. I thought you came alive in winter Benji, this has so much angst folded over and splatter'd on tearful windowpanes. That last line is just deadly, left me with a heavy heart. As usual you spin your pen in astounding metaphorical genius, just try to lighten up that darkly ink'd color my love. :-) xoxo

100 numb'd epitaphs



Posted 10 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Now that would be a thrill Mrs.R ;)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh for sure, I'd be flying on my own wings to Canada in an instant. ;-) xo
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha And I'd be waiting ;) xo
..."blisters of an inconsistent rain" That is so textured! Inconsistent rain stings. Emblems into epitaphs...puts me in mind of a paradigm. You manage to twist the mind into such provocative, perhaps melancholy, but potentially productive thought - thus: inspiring. Inspiration brings light even in the rain. Thanks.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

It was certainly written in a haze of melancholy...I'm so glad you were able to pick up on that vibe.. read more

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