HOLY, THIS IS WHAT LOVE IS. Seriously, this was just so....idk I feel like it just grabbed ahold of me and would not let go. I read this four times over. The imagery I got from this was amazing, the emotions so provocative and astonishing. The whole meaning I got out of this was just...Complete awe right now. I read it and found two different perspectives in it, I love each one I had. The beginning really dragged me in haha "This orgasm" wow packed that punch! 5 stars, thumbs up, pat on the back, bravo my friend!
Wow, you have left me humbled and speechless my friend. There are no words to express how tickled I.. read moreWow, you have left me humbled and speechless my friend. There are no words to express how tickled I am that you enjoyed it so much. Reading your review, I had a big smile on my face :) Thank you so much, your words mean more than you know :)
11 Years Ago
I'm glad my words at least give a positive impact. When I really enjoy a writing I try to let the wr.. read moreI'm glad my words at least give a positive impact. When I really enjoy a writing I try to let the writer know just how much by spazzing out in the most gracious of ways haha. ANYTIME
Damn. We go along with this delusion that we are in control. Even our precious creativity, our very ego, must bow to the limits of reality. Power in your words, K.
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11 Years Ago
Very true...and that delusion becomes a burden after a while...thank you Rita, for reading and under.. read moreVery true...and that delusion becomes a burden after a while...thank you Rita, for reading and understanding :)
"the slavery of realism" wow..to that line..i bow!
this is so frustrating...all that we want to do, all that we want to get out of our system...achieve..
but the dream is stifled to resignation..the orgasm will only get close...but it will never happen.
wonderful write. that hopelessness, that resignation...the dream that commits suicide. or is choked to death by circumstance beyond our control.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks so much my friend, you've really tapped into the spirit of this piece, and your kind words al.. read moreThanks so much my friend, you've really tapped into the spirit of this piece, and your kind words always mean the world.
Thank you so much my sweet friend :) You really tapped into the essence of this piece...loneliness i.. read moreThank you so much my sweet friend :) You really tapped into the essence of this piece...loneliness is a very good swimmer, and my muse is either very understanding or sick of the melancholy state I'm carrying around and holding a mirror up to me and my poetic tendencies haha You have a way of nudging yourself in between my lines and finding the meanings that hide behind those poetic devices...thank you Robbie :) xoxo
11 Years Ago
It's always a pleasure to read your work of art.. and I get your melancholy emotions... it's powerfu.. read moreIt's always a pleasure to read your work of art.. and I get your melancholy emotions... it's powerful, my sweet!~xoxo~:)
My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review.
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