MATRICULATING (Senryu)

06 19 13

Hand up.  Sheer white blouse
leans in to answer.  Teacher's
pet at your service.

Author's Note

Y'all are a bad influence...

Captcha: imawood

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Well, this reminds me of a few college courses that I have had, and a few things I have heard about. Well done on bringing the school fantasy to life here in this form. I like the "teacher's pet at your service" part. Nice blend of social observation and truth here.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much, I wanted it to be playful without dulling the realism of it...I think we've all had one of those leaning-in moments at some point in our growing up, the guys anyway haha

[quinfinn]

young teacher, the subject of schoolgirl fantasy.....don't stand so close to me...nailed it.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Shared with my teacher friends! They likey very much!

[kublakhan27]

Haha That's pretty cool...I'm glad they enjoyed it :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Fortunately, mine are middle-school students, and the other kids tolerate no "teacher's pets" - and neither do I! Fun senryu!

[kublakhan27]

Haha I wish the ones I went to school with were that intolerant :P Yeah this was just a little something for fun, I'm glad you got a laugh out of it :)

[Traci]

Not y'all....you meant to say, ROBBIE IS A BAD INFLUENCE!
I think we are seeing a side to you you've kept hidden, lol.
Nicely penned, my friend.

[kublakhan27]

Haha something tells me she's perfectly fine with that ;P I don't think it's really hidden, it's just one of those things that has to come naturally, which doesn't happen often when you're an over-thinker like I am haha Glad you liked it :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You naughty thing you!....I could use an assistant. ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Is there a halo over your head when you say that? As Springsteen said, this gun's for hire ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

now you know better!...what's a halo? lol
I'll hire you on the spot! ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha it's that aura of mischievousness circling around your mind ;) I'll be reporting for duty soon as I get a passport...don't give my job away to someone else now ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL I'll hold the position for you...don't ya worry about that Mister! ;)

[kublakhan27]

LOL Sounds good Mistres- I mean Miss - Robbie ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

(he he)..... down boy! ;)

[Zahra]

hahah, really funny and clever. Thanks for sharing

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure friend...glad it made you laugh :)

[MOON]

Ha ha, this was fun and apt title perfect.

[kublakhan27]

Haha thanks Moon, glad you got a laugh out of it :)

[Melobldnfr]

Lol. :-} This is nice. I don't mind being a bad influence, either. Lol.

[kublakhan27]

Haha good, we'll be bad influences together ;P

[s y e]

Ha! Nicely done bud!

Awesome job on this, wouldn't want to be a teacher though. So many kids disobey you these days and don't give a crap.

~ Noodle.

[kublakhan27]

Haha I know what you mean, I was saying the same thing to Jacob last night who is a former teacher...glad you liked it bud :)

[s y e]

He is, cool! Didn't know that, lol. I learn something new everyday, haha.

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah I didn't know till yesterday either :P

[s y e]

Oh, hahaha. xD

[kublakhan27]

I think we have a collective unconscious going on around here haha :D

[s y e]

I'd have to agree Mr. K. haha.

[kublakhan27]

;) haha

[s y e]

See, I'm learning, sir! ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha ;D

[s y e]

;-P I'll shut it now.

[kublakhan27]

LOL.... there is the fantastic irony again :D as a teachers daughter, I must laugh about this,
It's funny how the world, so clever as you, brings irony once learned by probably "teachers"
And a bunch of life experience. And you know what? you just teached us!!! This was awesome.

- Elisa

[kublakhan27]

Haha indeed...I'm very much in irony mode lately...of course it's always there but it seems to be filtering into my work even smoother than it usually does ;) This would certainly be humorous to a teacher's daughter :D Thank you Eli xoxo

Haha it was it was.... love your work! thanks again, Elisa xo