MATRICULATING (Senryu)

06 19 13

Hand up.  Sheer white blouse
leans in to answer.  Teacher's
pet at your service.

Author's Note

Y'all are a bad influence...

Captcha: imawood

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Well, this reminds me of a few college courses that I have had, and a few things I have heard about. Well done on bringing the school fantasy to life here in this form. I like the "teacher's pet at your service" part. Nice blend of social observation and truth here.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much, I wanted it to be playful without dulling the realism of it...I think we've all had one of those leaning-in moments at some point in our growing up, the guys anyway haha

[BL]

Nice captcha, thanks for participating

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure Bluely.

[K. Louis]

The good thing about few words in the right place is that the reader gets to build the rest. sexy little piece. :)

[kublakhan27]

Haha there is definitely a story waiting to be told here...thanks K :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

haha Aren't all school girls like this? :) Just kidding...but I have to say, when I was in college and I was miserably failing my spanish class and had to go in and speak with my professor about the grade because without a pass I wasn't going to be able to graduate that semester (and I had a 3.6 gpa, but simply could not do spanish)...anyway, so I went to the office and I made sure I was at my most attractive; hey, I figured it would help. Long story short, I'm not sure if it was my appearance or the fact that I burst into tears crying and begging for him not to fail me, but I passed the class. I have a feeling it was the tears, though...I was blubbering like an idiot...lol

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm not sure how to put this exactly (probably cuz I'm not feeling great and my head is a blur haha) but some teachers just have a gift for educating without opening a book...I think there is always an element of seduction involved in a student/teacher bond, whether it be conscious or not...I have had similar meetings with teachers in the past, usually my Science teachers cuz Science was my Spanish, but without the attractive factor haha As you can probably guess, it was all emotion with me, and it's just a good thing that I was a good student cuz I might still be back there trying to pick up those Science credits ;P Glad I was able to entertain you with this little vignette...thank you Sarah :)

[Rebecca Buller]

Ooh, I love senryu's, kublakhan27. And this one was absolutely perfect. I think we've all known someone like this. Brilliant!!

[kublakhan27]

Haha I don't write too many of these actually cuz I'm too rambly for such a concise form, but I seem to have struck a nerve with this little vignette...thank you Rebecca :)

[Rebecca Buller]

You're welcome:-)

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! You just had to do it, didn't you ;-) (rummaging around in my closet for the blouse and plaid skirt...aha...found them...now what did I do with those knee socks? xD) Nicely done, Steven...

[kublakhan27]

Haha take a picture when you find them ;) Thank you Kim :)

[KAOlmsted]

xD My pleasure! xoxo

[Pete Langley]

I agree with Jacob, Steve...I think it`s disgraceful behaviour...don`t you just love it, though??? P.

[kublakhan27]

Haha judging by the attention this little piece has gotten, I think it's loved by many, as are most disgraceful things :P Thanks my friend.

[Angi]

Funny, naughty guy, you! Angi~

[kublakhan27]

I must have caught people off-guard with this one...I didn't think a senryu would get this much attention haha Thank you Angi :)

[Stella Armour]

i have to smile ..i can just see the longing to be special image...

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah just something for fun, but probably relevant to many...thanks Stella :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Ohhh, you. But you can turn a phrase.

[kublakhan27]

Haha thank you Pryde.