VELVETEEN MACHINATIONS?

VELVETEEN MACHINATIONS?

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Are the goosebumps
an authorization
of velveteen machinations?

Sweat envelops you
into its litmus sarong
threading you with more chic
than Le Freak set on repeat

Are the goosebumps
a chilled phalanx of resentment
beneath the A/C rendered
unattended in my new
pantheon of spontaneity?

Seduction is an insult
to my imagination
and my imagination
makes a mockery
of my intentions

Make the demand
for a skinnydip
in the hot oil springs
of July humidity
and I will gladly offer you my nudity
like sandpaper for your bristle

© 2013 kublakhan27


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My friend, this bleeds before my eyes. Seduction is an insult to my imagination. well, left out in the cold there is no telling where the imagination is bound go...slip sliding down to that oil based hot tub perhaps.
Now, Le Freak on repeat may be ging just a bit too far I think...oh the thought...I think my mind might explode sending my imagination to an old shut down disco on the east side.

Still I get this and it hits home...on that empty street where doorbells have been outlawed and that's not a knock on anyone.

Very cool my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Well it took a while to dislodge my tongue from my cheek after writing this one. This came fro.. read more



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My friend, this bleeds before my eyes. Seduction is an insult to my imagination. well, left out in the cold there is no telling where the imagination is bound go...slip sliding down to that oil based hot tub perhaps.
Now, Le Freak on repeat may be ging just a bit too far I think...oh the thought...I think my mind might explode sending my imagination to an old shut down disco on the east side.

Still I get this and it hits home...on that empty street where doorbells have been outlawed and that's not a knock on anyone.

Very cool my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Well it took a while to dislodge my tongue from my cheek after writing this one. This came fro.. read more
more to this than carbon to skip cylindrical patterns on with an ebb groove needled by seismographic pops of this earth shaking inspired piece..excellent

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

It must be a hell of a poem if there's still more to it after all those events haha...I'm being face.. read more
Well I'm seduced! lol
You have a way with words my friend..yes you do!
On here, you have schooled the pragmatic...taking an artistic approach to chillaxing with some classic vinyl tunes...
The last two stanzas have me on my toes... I'm thinking YES! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha well as you know, music is a great tool of seduction ;) Always glad to keep you on your toes lo.. read more
Steve this is definitely one of your best. Well penned, my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Traci

11 Years Ago

I'm glad I could make you smile :) I do know what you mean, I am the same way. I lack confidence wh.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Well you know you have a fan in me :) I know how it feels to have low self-esteem...it's haunted me .. read more
Traci

11 Years Ago

You will always have a friend and fan in me :) I'm happy this is your safe place, where you feel le.. read more
I do love all your well spelled contradictions my friend, they always are "it seems" in fight lol...
For that makes this so brilliant, as a piece of poetry. Your questioning is fantastic. The music is fantastic... at 3.24, I can hear why Biggie Smalls. was inspired ;-) with Hypnotize... :) " Seduction is an insult to my imagination and my imagination makes a mockery of my intentions" Yes! true! Always be as clever as you are, and stay out of all the mean/gossips/turmoil, as you really know better. (you don't have to be a sensitive person for that, just a wise one". :) xoxo



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

The feelings are mutual my dear! xo
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:) xo

10 Years Ago

I still can't get enough of that song lol...... it is a stay-er :P
Love your turn of phrase and the music complements the mood ha!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you as always Moon, glad you liked both :)
A entertaining and lucid write. The last stanza displayed a skill all poets should possess. Dare to challenge the imagination of your reader. You did that beautifully. A fine write and read. Great work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Many thanks B :)
Hahaha. This is as confused and contradictory a response to a sexual fantasy as I`ve read in a long time, Steve....and I love it! Why, I don`t know, but it reminds me of that old Aussie joke about the farmhand who hits town after six months in the Outback, walks into the empty bar, downs three Fosters, then asks the barmaid "Hey Sheila, d`you f..k?" and she replies "Well not normally, Bruce...but as you`re such a sweet talking b*****d....." Well done, mate. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha thanks so much Pete...that joke brought a smile to my face :)
Im not sure if its intended but the emotion in this is heavy but hard to distinguish whether or not its passion, love, shame, resentment....maybe a combination of many? Either way you open the mind to ponder on this one. Its very thought provoking and your word selection is brilliant. Thank you for sharing and being such a poetic inspiration.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Keely...things have been kind of topsy-turvy with me lately and it definitely came ou.. read more
Such a strong, effective and powerful write that brought out so much emotion and though! I loved the way that you can always take the reader on a journey, and it's like your write is a movie playing on my screen. (: It was great, bud!

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, it feels good knowing I can take a reader on that kind of journey...I'm glad yo.. read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

Pleasure.

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Tags: goosebumps, velvet, machinations, sweat, skin, seduction, imagination, demand, skinnydip, humidity, nudity

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kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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