ALL HEART?

ALL HEART?

A Poem by kublakhan27
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For Noodlehead 03 30 13

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No body fat
No penis
No problem

© 2013 kublakhan27


Author's Note

kublakhan27
Would you believe I've been sitting on these seven words for over ten years? I sat on them while the resentment I harboured towards my male brethren festered infinitely against the backdrop of years in an all-male dorm...Noodle's poem All Heart brought them back to mind :P

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Pax
hahaha.... i really find this funny...pardon me my friend for that... :D
but the ending "no problem" ~ gives a great positive outlook... so you should remember that always... if nobody likes you so you say "no problem" ~ its their lost... :D

awesome!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I'm glad it made you laugh my friend :) I never thought of looking at it that way before but i.. read more



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Out of all your poems, I chose this one to review first, lol.
What can I say.... 7 words, very creative!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha Thank you Traci :) I wouldn't want them all to be seven words long, but I do wish I could be mo.. read more
"No penis
No problem" - :)))) Indeed! A great way of putting an end to half of the world's problems! Though unaware of the background in which this was written but really loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha yeah no kidding...I'm glad it made you laugh ;)
You know, at first blush this is a slap in the fact of wit, but upon deeper pondering I find a myriad of metaphors to explore here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

It has taken on that feel for me as well as I've gotten older, which I never would have banked on ye.. read more
the best poem yet please tell me i am doing this right

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha well if people can write six-word stories, they can also write seven-word poems...many thanks a.. read more
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Pax
hahaha.... i really find this funny...pardon me my friend for that... :D
but the ending "no problem" ~ gives a great positive outlook... so you should remember that always... if nobody likes you so you say "no problem" ~ its their lost... :D

awesome!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I'm glad it made you laugh my friend :) I never thought of looking at it that way before but i.. read more
"Hmm..i don't think so." An honest statement that sparked at the back of my head when I read this:D

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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:D
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

What! LOL, I'm basing my statement on my own orientation:)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

LOL ;)
HA!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:)
This is so amusing. The brevity really heightens the humor.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you, glad it made you laugh :)
Bhahaha, you're too much Steve, as per my review to Sye, the lil' noodle of our hearts....


BARBIES ARE STUPID...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

;D
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha still laughing! xD
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:D

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Added on March 30, 2013
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kublakhan27
kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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