Would you believe I've been sitting on these seven words for over ten years? I sat on them while the resentment I harboured towards my male brethren festered infinitely against the backdrop of years in an all-male dorm...Noodle's poem All Heart brought them back to mind :P
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hahaha.... i really find this funny...pardon me my friend for that... :D
but the ending "no problem" ~ gives a great positive outlook... so you should remember that always... if nobody likes you so you say "no problem" ~ its their lost... :D
awesome!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Haha I'm glad it made you laugh my friend :) I never thought of looking at it that way before but i.. read moreHaha I'm glad it made you laugh my friend :) I never thought of looking at it that way before but it's true haha Many thanks :D
Out of all your poems, I chose this one to review first, lol.
What can I say.... 7 words, very creative!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Haha Thank you Traci :) I wouldn't want them all to be seven words long, but I do wish I could be mo.. read moreHaha Thank you Traci :) I wouldn't want them all to be seven words long, but I do wish I could be more concise at times :P
"No penis
No problem" - :)))) Indeed! A great way of putting an end to half of the world's problems! Though unaware of the background in which this was written but really loved it.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Haha yeah no kidding...I'm glad it made you laugh ;)
You know, at first blush this is a slap in the fact of wit, but upon deeper pondering I find a myriad of metaphors to explore here.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
It has taken on that feel for me as well as I've gotten older, which I never would have banked on ye.. read moreIt has taken on that feel for me as well as I've gotten older, which I never would have banked on years ago :P
the best poem yet please tell me i am doing this right
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Haha well if people can write six-word stories, they can also write seven-word poems...many thanks a.. read moreHaha well if people can write six-word stories, they can also write seven-word poems...many thanks again.
hahaha.... i really find this funny...pardon me my friend for that... :D
but the ending "no problem" ~ gives a great positive outlook... so you should remember that always... if nobody likes you so you say "no problem" ~ its their lost... :D
awesome!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Haha I'm glad it made you laugh my friend :) I never thought of looking at it that way before but i.. read moreHaha I'm glad it made you laugh my friend :) I never thought of looking at it that way before but it's true haha Many thanks :D
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