WALTZING VANILLA

03 13 13

Fast blood's inquiry
swims in anticipation of a kickstart
from a hand's affirmation of willingness
to be directed to the floor

Will you entertain the modestly-muscled
torch of a nervous arm's appeal
for a waltz around
the swirls of aloof Vanilla?

The shiny pistons of your legs
naked to the thighs
can resuscitate the rust
slumbering unconscious
on Vanilla's engine of
romantic traffic
The intrusions in your neatly-ironed
dress are already being eyed

The aloof shrug of resignation vibrates
in confinement behind Vanilla's
chopping-block chest
like a pulse of introverted torment
Vanilla's pedal has been yearning
for a tempo-treading heel
long enough

Will the segue in the songs of
acquaintance and knowing
cue the needle of your abdomen
to puncture the dividing line of air
between the yet-to-burgeon
chemistry of fused rhythm?

Step into the swirl
and take this waltz
at the end of its wick
like a cigarette
outstretched for ignition
by the cherry tongue of another

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You just made love with music, I hear you playing guitar or something... and talking in codes through lyrics again :D♫ then it turns out eroticly gorgeous, to what inner desire speaks or sings maybe the most of ;) haha... this was again such a masterpiece of yours. Your brain merge a lot of musings together... :) awesome!

- Elisa

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Elisa, I'm so glad you tapped into it this deeply :) I wish I played something but I've never had the chance to learn anything...piano would probably be my first choice ;P It's funny you mention code too cuz Frieda used the exact same word to describe me yesterday...what can I say, I can't help it :P Thank you again my friend :)

:) Good choice hehe... Ah really? lol, well you talk in codes, sometimes I understand, sometimes, not.. but at least you crack my brain :D just awesome! this was an amazing piece! welcome anytime... (if I have time lol)... xo

[kublakhan27]

Great minds think alike haha ;D xox

That's for sure :D

[kublakhan27]

;D

[MsJewel]

Waltzing Vanilla - you had me hooked with the title and I was thrilled to read this sensual little dance of words. Great writing my friend!
:) Julie

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much my friend, always a pleasure to hear from you :)

[KAOlmsted]

And here's me, sitting and swaying, rocking to the rhythm of your words. Not a lot of vanilla in this piece, Steve...a whole lot of chunky monkey ;-) Seriously good write.

[kublakhan27]

Haha it's more like vanilla channeling chunky monkey ;P Thank you Kim, I always enjoy making you sway ;)

[KAOlmsted]

And you do it so well ;-) Always my pleasure.

[kublakhan27]

;)

[Rhianne Ney]

Nice and great penned poem (: I love this

100/100
and placed in library

[kublakhan27]

I'm glad you like it, thank you Rhianne :)

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome, your poems are great by the way

[kublakhan27]

As are yours :)

[Rhianne Ney]

(: Gee, thanks and my pleasure again to read your work

[kublakhan27]

:)

[Rhianne Ney]

;D

[MOON]

Waltzing vanilla inspired title and the rest that follows full of love and desire. Lovely word choice as usual .

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Moon...always a pleasure to hear from you :)

[s y e]

Wow.... Holy..... Oooooft!

I am speechless! That was very erotic! Wow!

[kublakhan27]

Many thanks my friend :)

[s y e]

;-)

[ms. barrie]

This poem lyrically weaves the imagery of subtle hints of erotic fantasies, desires longing to be satisfied, if only one could really know what others are thinking, hmm.
...................
The shiny pistons of your legs
naked to the thighs
can resuscitate the rust
slumbering unconscious
on Vanilla's engine of
romantic traffic
The intrusions in your neatly-ironed
dress are already being eyed

--- Brilliantly penned, well crafted poem.
your choice of words, set on fire, almost melting
the monitor screen, mixed in with fluidity,
makes for a great, pleasurable write.
Thanks for sharing, kublahkan! :)

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Barrie, I'm glad you found pleasure in this piece :) I was teetering between pain and pleasure in the writing of this one haha I have no idea what she's thinking, even though she's a figment of my own imagination ;P Heck I don't even know what she looks like haha She's hot, that's all I know ;) Glad you enjoyed it my friend :) xox

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Mr. k.! I know what you mean...I'll be writing about HIM soon :D
I did, every much :) xox

[kublakhan27]

:D I'll be waiting *hugs* :)

[ms. barrie]

it'll be Chapter 28 :)

[kublakhan27]

:)

[ms. barrie]

almost finished with Part II. might be 45 Chapters now. :)

[kublakhan27]

Haha I think you should do away with the preconceived number of chapters my dear :) I don't think this pair of yours is gonna let your imagination off the hook at any given chapter...I think they're gonna stick around as long as they like ;)

[ms. barrie]

Good idea...Mr.k.! I'm so scatter-brained , trying to control chaotic thoughts, though I try! Thanks so much for the advice! :)

[kublakhan27]

Haha it is natural to try and control the chaos, but it has a mind of its own, especially in times of, well, passionate obsession ;D

[ms. barrie]

LOL. witty, very witty, Mr. k.! :)

[kublakhan27]

LOL ;)

[ms. barrie]

:P :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, this is erotic as hell...

so subliminal....just hints of possiblities of touch....of what could be...what lies beneath the dress....imagination can be so sexy.

[kublakhan27]

I guess my imagination has had a lot of time to dwell on such things haha Thank you Jacob :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Oh this is the pickle for the feminine appetite.

[kublakhan27]

I hope it is.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh my!...lighting a cigarette has never been this good!.... I think I need one now! (and I no longer smoke, I quit years ago)...
You truly know how to entice ones desire for vanilla! I loved dipping into this fabulous swirl of words you have ignited...and I definitely fancy the cherry on top!
This is magnificent array of deliciousness! Nice! ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha I wanted one when I was done, believe me ;) I wasn't sure where this one was gonna go when I started it but I seem to have found a happy place with it...thank you Robbie :) xoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

that you have!...your happy place makes me happy too!... love this!...
all the sudden I have a craving for vanilla... wonder why? ;)

[kublakhan27]

You don't need Vanilla Robbie, you're sweet enough ;) It is my favourite scent, that's where it all started...it's also my favourite ice cream so I was craving that too all through the writing of this...I hope I don't make you crave it too by mentioning that haha ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

OMG!....I totally love vanilla ice cream... and drizzled with carmel and chocolate syrup!...Now look what you've done!!!...
gotta go... time for dessert! ;)

[kublakhan27]

LOL That's the best thing I've heard all day...I would kill for that right now ;D