CASUAL FRIDAY

CASUAL FRIDAY

A Poem by kublakhan27
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03 08 13

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Consider the slivers of flame
in the cage and think about it

Stardom waits patiently enough
in the vision of a maid
waiting on a warm poker
like a melting baton
Is submission a gratuity willing to be left
on my night stand for an audience
with a lonely man's cliche of choice?

Why be satisfied with a maid's itinerary
when stardom fidgets all the more
anxiously for a maiden?
All I'd ask on a whim of stipulation
is a donning of a loose white toga
to whitewash the winks of your exposed
tan like a sheer smile of silk

Unless you wish to come
and feed the fidget in the flesh
envy is a fruitless answer to the
wooden documentary I direct
to keep my uniform fetish on ice

© 2013 kublakhan27


Author's Note

kublakhan27
A note on the avatar: I didn't find that pic till after I wrote this, but if I'd seen it beforehand, it may very well have inspired this writing anyway.

I'm not sure if this happens anywhere else but in Canada we have this thing called Casual Fridays, when people can go to work wearing casual clothes...cuz it's Friday, I guess...


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Haha uniform fetish :D this poem is a little more deeper than just causal clothes on Fridays haha but don't all your poems have deeper meanings and secret agendas to them :D i love your flawless use of words. Good to read you after a long time, awesome awesome awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha yes that was a late addition :D And it's true that there's more at work here than what is said .. read more



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You have created a remarkable piece, Love! I absolutely can feel the connection you are developing with another as your words give questions in subtle seduction. Expressing yourself in this way is a fabulous change! I believe exploring passion and expressing it in your writing as opposed to being cemented in the often negative aspects of life's curve balls will free your mind more. Take a break, breathe in the fire and embrace the journey of freedom from the mundane. You are so wonderful and cherished, I only hope for you to find a place where you can soar above what ails you and come forth anew:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

I've said it before, but you are one of my greatest sources of inspiration, both in literary terms a.. read more
Priscilla Sayers

11 Years Ago

Like I always say....
I love ya Buddy!
I can`t help it, Kube - I have the distinct impression it ain`t just casual clothes you`re wearing. This smacks of artistic anarchy to me. My guess - wrong probably- is that this is biting our bums with the bared teeth of barmy metaphors for red herrrings! The whole has it`s own sort of authority, because it could be all things to all men! It sure makes you masticate on possibilities! P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Oh I'm casual enough, I'm just not thinking casual thoughts haha I always wait with bated breath to .. read more
Pete Langley

11 Years Ago

Y....eah mmm OK. I`ve had another look....and maybe I`ll leave it to the girls to tear you apart. P.. read more
Every visitor needs a map and the notes are welcome. But that doesn't stop the random tourist from transmogrifying reality to suit themselves. It's not a statue with pigeon poop on it; it's a work of art. Let the transmogrification begin... from office to rink.

So, again we see... as you've implied before, you don't always keep your eye on the puck while the game is in progress, do you? Sometimes you daydream... those curious little twisted beasties that we've all come to know and love. The ones that make you a U-U (wuz gonna say yo-yo but it sounds like I be rapp'n, dog, ya know?) on a string of up and down merry-go-round cardboard cutout carousel figures. We hear the music of the Calliope and are drawn to the garish primary colors that, at once, both illuminate and silhouette the riders as it diverts attentions and masks the the interior motor; the mind that is you my dear Kahn.

I wonder, if you carve little animals out of soap and use them in the shower, will it imbue one with the characteristics of the carved effigy? ~ Bob, the angry flower.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I'm all about transmogrification...bring on the transmogrification :P I must carry some of the .. read more
I don't see the relevance of casual Friday with the content of the piece. Sorry but I was really thinking hard about the relevance. Unless becasue you wrote it on a Friday and you were not wearing uniform or not wearing something at all, lol. Who knows what was on your mind when your scribbled this down? Okay, well then I guess all men has their own little fantasies just like women do. I think everybody is guilty of it. Different fantasies, some shallow, some deep, some sky high. I think what this piece implies is how someone can completely obtain the real essence of satisfaction whether it's bodily satisfaction, spiritual satisfaction or the satisfaction of inordinate desire to possess fame. There might be humor on this piece which I am unable to determine, sarcasm maybe? I'm not sure. Sensuality? It has been made apparent but not directly implied, maybe intended for another meaning. This piece definitely made me think. And by the way, I am having a casual Friday. Just saying...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Androglossia

11 Years Ago

To tell you To tell you honestly, this poem induced a great deal of topics in my head that I went cr.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha don't think of it that way, you provide a very unique perspective amongst my readers that I val.. read more
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

Isn't it amazing how words can bring different thoughts to everyone? Honestly, I was very hesitant o.. read more
we have casual "whenever" days in the u s of a...although not quite like this scenario...though i am sure it happens somewhere. still can't decide whether or not this is kinky...maybe it's just my warped mind. awesome write though, as per usual, khan!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Ah okay, I was pretty sure they were common in the States as well but I didn't want to assume haha I.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

actually, i love it....thanks
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:)
Ha! I can't give this one a review!! Maybe once I calm down, sorry....xo Lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ah about time you woke up you bum! ;-P
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

;P
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Rough night sweetie? ;-P

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kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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