NO QUESTION HERE

11 ?? 04

No question here my friend
Understanding's at an overdue end
Draw your blinds as I'm now aware
of the stare that I project
Do you yet believe it was the offer of a friend
The questioning of character
Such ill meaning in your shallow definition
You'll have to lay me down
much deeper than that
before my words die as dead as my weight
And speaking of weight
let us now downplay my heavy heart
I have a right to make my gloom an art
This loneliness may not be your intention
but the span of your attention
may reduce my voice to idle vibration
and I'd rather have a grating effect
It may be my last chance at being heard
It may be my last chance at bearing a response

Author's Note

The latest in a flood of old things I'm dusting off and displaying here, for better or worse.

Reviews

[Phillitup]

This poem is really interesting. A very good write if you ask me. :)

I really love all of this poem. I can't quote because that would basically be copying and pasting this whole poem.

Wonderful work!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much :) This started as kind of an experimental piece but it gradually developed a life of its own.

[Phillitup]

:)

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is not the worst of it, this is some of the best of it.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much

[Pax]

This loneliness may not be your intention
but the span of your attention
may reduce my voice to idle vibration
~ wow, a stunning loneliness in idle vibration, and i believed it speaks of truth as well as relatable.

Brilliant work here my friend.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much^^ I seem to have lost that relatable element in recent things...I'm hoping I can rekindle it sometime soon...

[Pax]

well it may not be easy at times...but just listen to your soul and you'll know...your welcome my friend

[kublakhan27]

Thanks again, I will do my best^^

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's a great release to express your thoughts or emotions...a very therapeutic process. We all have a need to be heard, and I believe your voice is strong within this write. Great work.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much^^

[That_Girl]

"before my words die as dead as my weight
And speaking of weight
let us now downplay my heavy heart
I have a right to make my gloom an art" Love that. All your pieces have this unique personality. Well done!

[kublakhan27]

Thank you as always for the support...just glad I can produce some unique stuff :)