SEROQUEL

SEROQUEL

A Poem by kublakhan27
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It's that kind of tired
where yawns
snuggle up beneath your tongue
and sleep
through dependency
while your cheekbones
seize the opportunity
to stretch your face
and take your eye
balls down with them
and like a mood swing
make you feel
nonchalantly awake
then
as if on liberated slinkys
jack up and take
your mouth with them
red-handing
those yawns
you so terribly depend on
to shut out
the lights on your stubborn
insomniac ball
of a brain


© 2012 kublakhan27


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Seroquil, Gabitril and Paxil kept me in a persistent yawn for months. Throw in an Ambien here and there and I was a walking zombie. Powerful stuff that I will never ever take again. There are days that I cannot remember any part of. This poem makes me shudder to think back on that slice of my life. Description is spot on, Steve. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angi

11 Years Ago

I found that taking all those meds took the Angi out of me. y husband said that he couldn't recogni.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

You are a ray of light my friend...I have saved these words to my hard drive and will never forget t.. read more
Angi

11 Years Ago

You are so welcome. Have a good evening my friend.



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I hate Seroquil! hate the name, hate the taste from my dry tongue as I swallowed that chemical noose down! I despised how they stayed left a chalky film in my belly undigested..metabolizing them was a pain in the a$$...
that stuff made me an extroverted hunger thriving zombie; half away awake to the world! One time I remember I was eating a tub of ice cream with one hand and a raw hot dog with the other ..I laugh about it now, but then..ugh it sucked! I didn't even take a full dose, I use to cut those little yellow mothers and take a fourth at night just so I could actually wake up in the morning and be on time for work. They look like little yellow cakes of uranium for your cranium...Sir- Whoa- Kill! I am sorry for my little rant; brought up old memories
Anyway, your poem was right on point..I like how you write; your style. I remember those uncontrollable yawns and your eyes water as your jaw shakes involuntary...bravo! excellent piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha it's alright, spontaneous rants have become their own art form for me...I'm glad the piece reso.. read more
writing mojo

11 Years Ago

I do admire how clear headed your poetry is, it must be working well for you. My thoughts jump so mu.. read more
Seroquil, Gabitril and Paxil kept me in a persistent yawn for months. Throw in an Ambien here and there and I was a walking zombie. Powerful stuff that I will never ever take again. There are days that I cannot remember any part of. This poem makes me shudder to think back on that slice of my life. Description is spot on, Steve. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angi

11 Years Ago

I found that taking all those meds took the Angi out of me. y husband said that he couldn't recogni.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

You are a ray of light my friend...I have saved these words to my hard drive and will never forget t.. read more
Angi

11 Years Ago

You are so welcome. Have a good evening my friend.
Now you've got me yawning and incredibly sleepy... that sounds like me on video games, wanting to crash, but too adrenaline pumped to crash. Mind running every which way except the direction of sweet oblivion, sleep. Very relatable indeed ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Oh I don't think I could even take this stuff if I was still at school...I'd have to deal with the p.. read more
Castonovia

11 Years Ago

Haha yeppers, same ;D
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

;D
I know people on that drug and you have giving me a great insight into what they must feel like and go through. Great Write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks very much, if you ever have trouble sleeping, this is what you want...you may have heard that.. read more
I have been on that drug, and man, I never slept better. I experience that kind of tired every so often when I drive to and from my job, which is an hour away from where I live. I have tried bouncing around in my seat, keeping the air cold but those yawns keep coming until I stop driving. So, so feel this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks very much, you're the first person that's told me they've actually taken it...I don't think I.. read more
I can definitely relate to this! Your depiction of the yawning, (the tired mood swing), truly captures the insomniac's daily struggles. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) I don't "live through" a whole lot of things I write but this is one of them .. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

12 Years Ago

It definitely brings back memories of sleepless nights and long days. Well done, my friend. :)
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks again, hopefully they remain memories and don't come back to life :)
lol made me tired you meanie-butt!!! lol great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Haha don't blame me, blame the meds :P Glad you like it :)
I have an insomniac ball of a brain lol

This is wonderful... it has a, how do I even describe this... it mimics the feeling of not sleeping for 3 days and just needing to crash. That sort of loopy, fantasy driven, movie like feeling... I'm not doing a very bang up review here am I? haha I hope you understand where I'm trying to go with this. Lovely piece hun. Really enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Haha no need to worry, I know exactly where you're coming from...I actually go through phases of ful.. read more
desire to sleep expressed on extremely technical and different perspectives ..
marvelous .. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thank you kindly :) yeah it's a complicated state lol
Wow! This is really cool and different, and I appreciate your unique writing sense. Great write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
♪The Girl Next Door♪

12 Years Ago

No problem :)

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Added on November 13, 2012
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Tags: seroquel, medication, bipolar, depression, mood stabilizer, sleep, mood swing, insomiac

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kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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