INCANTATION

06 28 99

Enter my grove
Reside in my ritual
Nourish the clove
That craves the habitual

Tickle the stream
That coyly recoils
In ripples that gleam
Like honeydew oils

Wade through yourself
Discover your blood
Self-baptize yourself
Rejoice in the flood

Stay from the lake
Come whisper with me
Indulge and partake
In seminal spree

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

ooooooooh wow... now this is dark, delicious, and damn stimulating... oh my goodness!!! love the rhymes and the rhythm in this one that adds to the intensity of the concise, powerful lines... the second stanza has to be my favorite.. HOT... wheeeew..... I love the way your mind works sir... This has to be one of my favorites of yours.. ooooh yes... some steamy imagery going on in my head right now, you naughty thing!! love it!!

[kublakhan27]

So glad you like this one my friend, I had an inkling that you might though it is one of those infamous teasers I'm known for ;P Would you believe this piece will be fifteen years old a week from today?? It's also going to be the first poem in my manuscript...I want this one on page one ;) Your review has me giggling like a schoolgirl...thank you April :) ((hugs))

[AprilRN1210]

well, it is a tease, but a good one... and WOW.. it is that old?... impressive.... you giggling like a school girl?.. now that is some funny imagery right there... would pay to see it.. ha! ((hugs)) back to you my friend...

[kublakhan27]

Haha I should charge admission for it cuz I don't giggle often ;P

[Bewitching Sensations]

Love this piece :)

[kublakhan27]

Thank you, I'm glad you do :)

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What a delicious feast for the mind :) Yummy

[kublakhan27]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

I love this, the flow, nice and easy.... Relaxing like a hammock swaying in the whispering breeze, your voice soft and caring. Nice!

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Priscilla :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

So welcome, my talented friend:)

[MOON]

Lovely flowing write , sensual.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much :)

[AK]

Wow! Great poem! As always, I loved your unique choice of words. Keep writing!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much :)

[AK]

You're welcome!

[Androglossia]

A flower bud, honeydew oils, lake.. so in tuned with nature. You made the dance of making love sounds sacred, so organic. Very clean. Very ancient. I love the flow of this.

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Maryanne...I wish I could evoke those feelings in the readers of my work more often.

[Androglossia]

Try sending them to people who don't just say "nice", lol.

[kublakhan27]

lol yeah no kidding...