INCANTATION

INCANTATION

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Enter my grove
Reside in my ritual
Nourish the clove
That craves the habitual

Tickle the stream
That coyly recoils
In ripples that gleam
Like honeydew oils

Wade through yourself
Discover your blood
Self-baptize yourself
Rejoice in the flood

Stay from the lake
Come whisper with me
Indulge and partake
In seminal spree

© 2012 kublakhan27


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ooooooooh wow... now this is dark, delicious, and damn stimulating... oh my goodness!!! love the rhymes and the rhythm in this one that adds to the intensity of the concise, powerful lines... the second stanza has to be my favorite.. HOT... wheeeew..... I love the way your mind works sir... This has to be one of my favorites of yours.. ooooh yes... some steamy imagery going on in my head right now, you naughty thing!! love it!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

So glad you like this one my friend, I had an inkling that you might though it is one of those infam.. read more
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

well, it is a tease, but a good one... and WOW.. it is that old?... impressive.... you giggling like.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha I should charge admission for it cuz I don't giggle often ;P



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And there, in the lower left corner of the endearment-carved portion of the tree's sturdy trunk was the tiny addendum, "Ahab was here."

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Haha :P
Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat

12 Years Ago

:)
very Witchy I like it, it feels like a circle in the middle of an open field with pagan incense

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Many thanks, I'm happy that it was able to spark your imagination
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Pax
very cool and awesome imagery... somewhat bizarre in a surreal kinda way...which is great...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Haha yeah just thought I'd go with pure imagination for a change...glad you like it^^
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Haha yeah just tried to rely on pure imagination for a change...glad you like it^^
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TLK
Wade through yourself
Discover your blood
Self-baptize yourself
Rejoice in the flood

A powerful image, partly because of the well-worn spiritual imagery being inverted and turned into something so biological.
The dual-meaning of 'seminal' at the end is very cheeky. Everything turns to seed, I guess. Even the most well-meaning minds need to spend theirs, sometimes: red-faced, brown-robed, looking at each other with the innocence of lust.



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I was hoping I'd accomplish a number of things with this little piece, as I tried to thro.. read more
TLK

12 Years Ago

The fun thing about summing up the human condition is that you can never do it totally, so it is nev.. read more
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Yes, as long as we carry the concept of a human condition, there will always be something that has n.. read more
short and sweet, but valid in its description of a more ancient-like spell. Written well!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)
AWESOME!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much :D
Beautiful...unlike anything I've read. Congratulations!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)
Lyrical indeed, dear poet... lovely yet oh so sanctified with such divine wording... sensual yet holy ish... loved this beautiful piece :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
Castonovia

12 Years Ago

My pleasure, keep up the good work ;p
i agree, the rhymes go very well in this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thank you^^
Oh your rhymes are impeccable! Very well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)

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kublakhan27
kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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