Does it bother anyone else that we are ruled by our own inventions? Market value? Profti margins? 'What are you reading, my lord?' 'Words. WORDS!' (Hamlet).
When we say we're writers, they say we make things up, that we're out of touch with reality. Wt...?
Home sweet home: this ironical world. Fiction, illusion and lies... known better as 'reality.'
Nice verse:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Oh it certainly bothers me, but it worries me as well. The funny thing is, I'm on another site and .. read moreOh it certainly bothers me, but it worries me as well. The funny thing is, I'm on another site and I've titled my folder "Words, words, words," though in that case it's more to flaunt my interest in Shakespeare than anything lol. Yeah I'm not sure what reality is anymore, especially in light of my illnesses, and this is probably the closest I've come to articulating that, and eight lines was all I could muster. In a nutshell, thanks for the comments and I'm glad you relate to it :)
Does it bother anyone else that we are ruled by our own inventions? Market value? Profti margins? 'What are you reading, my lord?' 'Words. WORDS!' (Hamlet).
When we say we're writers, they say we make things up, that we're out of touch with reality. Wt...?
Home sweet home: this ironical world. Fiction, illusion and lies... known better as 'reality.'
Nice verse:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Oh it certainly bothers me, but it worries me as well. The funny thing is, I'm on another site and .. read moreOh it certainly bothers me, but it worries me as well. The funny thing is, I'm on another site and I've titled my folder "Words, words, words," though in that case it's more to flaunt my interest in Shakespeare than anything lol. Yeah I'm not sure what reality is anymore, especially in light of my illnesses, and this is probably the closest I've come to articulating that, and eight lines was all I could muster. In a nutshell, thanks for the comments and I'm glad you relate to it :)
Grammar is nothing
to those who can't speak
It makes me remind myself of my teacher.
Great Poem! 100/100
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Haha yeah it does sound like something a teacher would say, I never thought of that...I'm glad you l.. read moreHaha yeah it does sound like something a teacher would say, I never thought of that...I'm glad you like it :D
Awesome poem:) it is very true and thought provoking.
(just a question, though economics is a plural noun, doesn't it take a singular verb i.e, economics /means/ little instead of economics mean little? That's like physics or gymnastics. I didn't mean to offend you, sorry if I did:) )
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12 Years Ago
Haha it's alright...I took some economics courses in school and I'm pretty sure the verb is singular.. read moreHaha it's alright...I took some economics courses in school and I'm pretty sure the verb is singular but that was a while ago now so I could be wrong...I'll have to check on it haha I'm glad you like the poem though :)
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