THE MEANING OF THIS

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Sunshine squall and cloudy mist
fight for newborn's dawn

On our lives the shapeless forms
shadows cast upon

Never see and never hear
never know the night

Hope the duties of the day
summon what is right

Author's Note

An old chestnut.

Reviews

[demureminds]

Great rhyme scheme and structure, I loved the first verse. Very well written!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much :)