Call on me Play my song I'll never stray far from a hero in need when that's what you are
Call on me Play my song I'll run to your side when your embattled feet yearn for a ride
Walk with me to the next town for rest time Run with me through troubled times Share with me stories of sifting through time Can you shine in such dark times?
Call on me Play my song I will never fail to be your friend and ally from snout to tail
Call on me Play my song Music brings us all together silently Tears down hate's wall
My lady sees sainthood in your dark eyes She's like a mother to me and like a mother she can read true friends and for their sake sets me free
Call on me Play my song I'll never stray far from a hero in need when that's what you are
Call on me Play my song Music brings us all together silently Tears down hate's wall
I wanted to steer clear of fanfiction on here because it's hasn't gone over as well here as elsewhere, but this has been pretty well-received on the other sites it's been on, so I figured I may as well try it here. The syrup content may be a bit overwhelming but I was going for lullaby simplicity.
For those unfamiliar with the music of "the ocarina," it is beautiful stuff and well worth looking up.
For those of you familiar with the Zelda games, Ocarina of Time in particular, this is meant to be "sung" to the tune of Epona's Song. I would have loved to throw in two or three extra syllables along the way but I didn't want to risk throwing off the rhythm, so here is what I'm pretty sure is a note-for-note accompaniment to what may be the most beautiful melody to emerge from the Ocarina.
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Speak to me Epona
(Review for Change the World Competition) I really really like this, Not totally sure it hits the markers for what I wanted in this competition though. The craft is magnificent and the subject superb. Despite the beauty of this work though, I do not feel enough power to say that I have had insight to motivate change. It may just be that I have a phobia of horses though as I was thrown off in a donkey derby when I was 8, ha ha. I am glad you entered this though just so I got to read it. I am sure this will do incredible well in lots of other competitions.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Haha It's alright, I kind of submitted this one on a whim, unsure of whether or not it would fit the.. read moreHaha It's alright, I kind of submitted this one on a whim, unsure of whether or not it would fit the bill...many thanks for taking the time to comment on it though.
Speak to me Epona
(Review for Change the World Competition) I really really like this, Not totally sure it hits the markers for what I wanted in this competition though. The craft is magnificent and the subject superb. Despite the beauty of this work though, I do not feel enough power to say that I have had insight to motivate change. It may just be that I have a phobia of horses though as I was thrown off in a donkey derby when I was 8, ha ha. I am glad you entered this though just so I got to read it. I am sure this will do incredible well in lots of other competitions.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Haha It's alright, I kind of submitted this one on a whim, unsure of whether or not it would fit the.. read moreHaha It's alright, I kind of submitted this one on a whim, unsure of whether or not it would fit the bill...many thanks for taking the time to comment on it though.
Thanks so much, This game quite literally changed my life, so I'm happy to know that this one means .. read moreThanks so much, This game quite literally changed my life, so I'm happy to know that this one means something to someone.
Not at all familiar with that type of music so I guess I got some looking up to do but these lines alone spoke volumes to me:
Call on me
Play my song
Music brings us all
together silently
Tears down hate's wall
I read that I was like WOW! Just WOW!
Thank you so much...I was genuinely hoping that this piece could still resonate with those unfamilia.. read moreThank you so much...I was genuinely hoping that this piece could still resonate with those unfamiliar with the music :)
My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review.
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