PAPER THAW

PAPER THAW

A Poem by kublakhan27
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His hollow haunt lends the ear
a hushed symphony of icy chimes

The majesty of his mere presence
lends a ghost of melody
to living silence

The cool mayor
of his crystalline community
The throng of disco needles
sewn together in sublime audience

The powder blue beast
scales Beatle-white
caressing hide of flexing azure
defines his house
like an Arctic Cleopatra
waiting on the courtship of muses
with bouquets of grammar
and perfumes of ink

© 2012 kublakhan27


Author's Note

kublakhan27
Inspired by the accompanying pic which I hope works cuz I'm not on my computer...it was a birthday gift from my gf^^

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I do so love dragons.

You and your girlfriend make a good couple, artists two.

This piece is like a sliver of ice in a storm of thought and imagination. I like how you wove music into the expose of the Frost Dragon and spoke of his dominance within his icy realm. The reference to Cleopatra is also a plus for the nod to other mythologies, of which the Egpytians also had a serpent in theirs.

Not bad. Not bad at all.

But the dragon needs a name. That is my only suggestion.

Well done.

-Caradoc

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks very much, I will pass that message on to her, and I'm happy that this was able to stir up su.. read more
Caradoc

12 Years Ago

You're most welcome. I wish you luck in your quest for a proper name.



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So Frikin Excellent! i especially love the last stanza, your just a wordy twister! :) good piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Okay, I give you my word that I will brag about it to friends at some point in the future lol :P
quixotic_rose

12 Years Ago

your word is accepted!
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

lol excellent :)
wow ...excellent poem ....well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thank you Afra^^
Wow! The picture is beautiful, I love dragons, and the poem fits it like a hand and glove. The imagery is great, and I (I read the poem before looking at the pic) could imagine it excellently. Awesome job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I'm glad you like both :)

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Added on August 13, 2012
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Tags: dragon, ice, blue, cave, icicles, arctic, needles, sublime, Beatle, azure, Cleopatra

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kublakhan27
kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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