ROAMER'S CHORUS

06 28 10

A penny to a well
is how my hand goes to your waist
to campaign for animation
of the sway that fear erased
Does longing have a vocal
independent from the rules of rhyme
not a pendulum but a sundial
to unfurl the time
I venture to divine from
our elastic history
Should I try to hang a note
or will you drum it shut on me?

Reviews

[Muse]

Your word play...and vocabulary..it is all very clever. Very much a free style read. Hmm...you need more viewers. Do you know how to send out read request? It's quite effective.

Muse

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much^^ I do send out the occasional request though I don't like to do it too often cuz I'm still relatively new here and I don't want to bombard people with my stuff...I may start doing it more though cuz a lot of people seem to do it with all their works and it might be the only way I can really get established here myself.

[Muse]

but..it only works if you review in return.

[kublakhan27]

I know what you mean...I didn't do much of that at first either but I'm starting to get more used to it now.