More than anything this is a short story comprised of a few small chapters..."Novella" is the best description I can think of within the Type options. See notes below.
While this is primarily a piece of fanfiction inspired by the Zelda games, it's my hope that it will work as a stand-alone story, as I've made a lot of alterations to the canonical elements of the series, including plot, characters, and settings. Oftentimes, my elements have little in common with the canonical elements aside from the names.
I was originally planning to write the entire story and release it as a single piece, but I've decided to go only with what I've called the overture to this point, as I'm still a way's off from getting this completed (though I already have two parts complete) and I have some other projects -mainly poems, which are my specialty anyway - I want to attend to while I give this a break. So hopefully this does carry some degree of drama for you, whether or not you're familiar with the games. :)
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This is awesome! I definitely see the Zelda references :) Loved playing that game! The whole thing is excellent and yes it does have the drama in it as well. The whole mind wipe thing just adds to the intensity of the destruction. well done! :D
First off, This epic fantasy you’re writing has the world’s most brilliant plot. The character is exceptional and has passed beyond what is ordinary. That is one of your strong points because readers will care about a story if they care about the characters. Sure, all the dragons, warriors, swords, and monsters were exciting, but readers only truly cared about the battles because they were about the characters.
I'm not really into fantasy but I like how you did it, the plot is well structured and the flow is easy to follow. I like the descriptive nature of the story and you have the skill to convey images into the minds on the readers.
Keep up thr good work.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
You have no idea how happy I am for you to like it that much and to give me those compliments...I ha.. read moreYou have no idea how happy I am for you to like it that much and to give me those compliments...I have this on other sites as well and it's getting very little attention which frankly has me feeling a bit resentful...so I'm really glad you like it :)
12 Years Ago
Oh, you don't need to feel that way, I have a pending story too and although it got a lot of attenti.. read moreOh, you don't need to feel that way, I have a pending story too and although it got a lot of attention on aother sites, it didn't get that much of attention on here. It's okay, all you need to do is to get useful tips from established book writers.
12 Years Ago
I know, it might just be a product of having a lousy week in general :P Oh, the bipolar doesn't exa.. read moreI know, it might just be a product of having a lousy week in general :P Oh, the bipolar doesn't exactly help either lol I haven't checked, but if your story is still on here, I will certainly check it out :)
It's still on but I must remind you that it's not a fantasy writing and might not go with your likin.. read moreIt's still on but I must remind you that it's not a fantasy writing and might not go with your liking. I might send you one request for one chapter only so you won't end up reading the whole 20 chapters, lol.
12 Years Ago
Oh, now that's a story lol But if you wanna send me the request for chapter one I'll definitely chec.. read moreOh, now that's a story lol But if you wanna send me the request for chapter one I'll definitely check it out^^
My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review.
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