The waves of a concrete ocean.A Poem by Kylefinally!!! my writers block is no more!!!!
The waves of a concrete ocean.
The rain seems to pour down now,
Harder than ever
Each little drop infiltrates the confines of my soul
My once calm ocean of consciousness
Miniature bullets, piercing into its depth
Creating an elastic motion
As the waters push downward
Then hurdle, suddenly into the air
Jumping for freedom
Gasping for air
Separating themselves from the bleak conformity below
My once pure, serene surface
Now intoxicated, by society’s influence
To numb the senses
Ease the pain
That never truly existed
Distorting my reflection of the world
And the worlds reflection of me
Turning my ocean a bright crimson
What used to be so smooth yet so concrete?
Now melts into the vague
A formless shape
As the water ripples,
Like the pulse of a thousand different earthquakes
Spreading out until their boundaries meet
Only to be separated once again
By, new, pure, forceful liquid jewels
Dropping from the skies of gray
Unaware of how their fates shall meet
In this cycle of distortion
Amid the waves of a concrete ocean
© 2008 KyleAuthor's Note
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5 Reviews Added on July 28, 2008 AuthorKylesomewhere south of "over the rainbow", and east of "no-man's land".............wait... or was it somewhere north of "no-mans land" and east of "over the rainbow".....crap!.......i think im lost!!???About"i may not have something to say yet, but i most surely have something to write!!!!" -me, age 12 hi im kyle! i turned 14 on august 8th 8-8-08 lol!!!!!!!, i love writing, and the way it can fre.. more..Writing
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