life

A Poem by Kyle

---life---------------------------------------Summer fails to last

Winter comes but fails to pass

As heaven’s golden gates slowly fade to brass

© 2008 Kyle

Author's Note

i know this may be short but i think that in its overall mening it carries a powerful message. " a poem that is long but dull does not compare to a poem that is short but sweet"

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Laura E. Aranda

I thank you for entering my contest It is short and to the point. I clearly get the message in a handful of words.....it was cool

Posted 16 Years Ago

Lexy

Poe makes me depressed, or make me think. The only thing I was thinking about was "How does this relate to life". And it made me confused. I guess your attempt @ being Poe was successful after all.
But still: How does that relate to life?

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on June 11, 2008

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Kyle

somewhere south of "over the rainbow", and east of "no-man's land".............wait... or was it somewhere north of "no-mans land" and east of "over the rainbow".....crap!.......i think im lost!!???

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"i may not have something to say yet, but i most surely have something to write!!!!" -me, age 12 hi im kyle! i turned 14 on august 8th 8-8-08 lol!!!!!!!, i love writing, and the way it can fre.. more..

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