Thank you for putting me back together.

Thank you for putting me back together.

A Poem by Katie

 in a world where love can build you up..or rip you into a million pieces.i am glad your the one thing-that always shines in my world.no matter how dark how gloomy, this beaten path gets-you are like a firefly- the light of my life...

 

you took my world by storm

and showed me love could form

you sheltered my heart from pain

and made me realize I was not insane

you also waited patiently for me

and picked up the pieces of the debris

i would not have made it out alone

for that, in my heart- you are put on a throne

i owe you more than you will ever know

i love everything about you from head to toes..

this heart was once beat & broken

But now it pumps with love as a token

a token of freedom, is what you gave to me

you love me with no cost or fee..

you are truly the best thing to happen in my life.

i am no longer battling the war of love with a double ended knife.

thank you...for loving me


from the depth of my soul

I once was broken, but now I am whole.

© 2009 Katie


Author's Note

Katie
This is written for my sweet Fiance..

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the lines that really touch me personally is:

'you also waited patiently for me/and picked up the pieces of the debris'

its always nice to have someone understanding who loves you completely and is willing to be the rock you need in the storm of life.

great job!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can't help but smile at these tender words of adoration and love.
I especially love this part...

But now it pumps with love as a token
a token of freedom, is what you gave to me
you love me with no cost or fee..

for me love is true freedom, where some think it means being trapped I think real love lets you be yourself.
Really wonderful work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 3, 2009

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