Love Me-Hate Me

look into my eyes

open up your mind

venture into my world

everything is pure

more happiness more of

everything you dreamed

has been tucked into my eyes

all for you just to see but..

tamper with my heart and

everything will crash into one

more of hate, less of the love

either love me or hate me

 

what do you choose?

Reviews

[snapstache]

Love it! ^.^

[J.Black]

The title grabbed me because of those words in a Brittney Spears song, lol! But this doesn't compare to her in any way, because you got class! And it's more like, you don't give a crap what they say, it's their call! But I love you- and I'm sure all your friends would have to agree with me! I love stuff like this Katie! Keep that attitude girl. =p ps) thanks for my review as well!

[Kelley]

A heart wrenching poem of truth.
great write Katie.