Dont Let Me

dont let me go crazy

crazy over you

you make it so easy

for me to love you

 

dont let me cry tears

tears over you

you make it so hard

for me to hate you

 

dont let me walk away

away from all we had

you make it so useless

to fight for all we planned

 

dont let me shut the door

the door of all your trust

you make it so crazy

to want something more than lust

 

make me fall in love

in love with all of you

you made me fall even

harder than you knew

 

make me see the light

the light upon your face

i want to see something breathtaking

like the touch of your embrace

Reviews

[J.Black]

Refreshing!

[only hope]

wow, you have me hooked at the minute :) great work. i feel every word you write,i hear every phrasing as if you were reading it to me :) x

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Simply irresistable, a sumptuous write with so many romantic overtones it is hard to pick just one or two out i fell in love with the idea of the poem it's infinite creative flowing idealogy,
When i give my heart i will always give it completely and the moment when i fall in love is when i fall in love with that girl.

[Ellen Hammond]

Very nice rhyme and flow. The repetition of the last words in the first line of each verse, adds rhythm and impact to them. I could almost hear this sung. Very nicely done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

make me see the light
the light upon your face
i want to see something breathtaking
like the touch of your embrace

that ending alone is amazing but when you add it to the verses leading up makes for one brilliant piece of emotions. Let me just say WOW!!

[mystic soul]

this one is really good... great job :)