Honest good bye

This was my first song I ever wrote and got published.

You think you know me. Confident as can be.
Lately, i am feeling- helpless, akward as can be.

(chorus)
I wanna scream
Save me from this beast, the beast that stold my heart
He has it under hostage. the hostage of my heart

(v2)
You thought you knew me..
You had no clue what my mind went through.
Why cant you love me? Everythings insane
Help make us whole again.

How can you leave me? Without an honest good bye?

(chorus)
I wanna scream
Save me from this beast, the beast that stold my heart
He has it under hostage. the hostage of my heart
 

(v3)
You never knew me. Battered and broken dreams
Im picking up the pieces.. of this.. sad and lonely heart.

You cant leave without an honest goodbyeee..

Author's Note

I was in a band when I was younger. This song is the first one I sang on a c-d and everything.

Reviews

[only hope]

wow :) this is impressive, i really like this piece/song, i think id like to hear it as a song one day from you :).
keep it up