Value

Look at me,

see my face,

what does it mean to see,

do you see what I do in the mirror,

ugly girl staring back,

the face value of her,

is nothing,

she means nothing,

Go ahead,

look and see,

what the value of her truly is,

she means nothing,

nor does she care,

what of her value is among others,

go ahead,

call her nothing,

dumb,

stupid,

ugly. 

Tell her she has nobody,

same thing as saying no value,

she already knows,

what her value is,

it's absolutely nothing,

she hates herself,

people can say,

she means nothing,

she won't care,

as she already knows,

her value is nothing,

she has no meaning in this world,

she has no value in this life,

she see's no point,

she knows she has no value.

She means absolutely nothing to other people,

call her stupid,

ugly, 

dumb. 

Tell her she has nothing,

that she has nobody,

she already knows,

does not need to be told,

by any other people

that she has no meaning or value,

she does not need to hear it from none others,

that how stupid she is,

that she is dumb,

she already understands,

the fact that she has no value

does not bother her,

go ahead and say it,

No value in this girl!

Reviews

[No name]

I can understand where your coming from and the emotion in it. Realize that everyone has meaning and people will care, even if it just that special one. Nice write.

[Jazmine Norris]

i like the passion in yourwork, but i think you could have put more variety of words, but i get why you kept repeating yourself, and the passion cme through, just work on the flow a little more