Run and Run

Very dark

Everything in my mind is saying to run away from all that has happened in my life. Escape this world of hurt, of pain.

As I run and run I find t he world empty.

No emotion, nothing at all.

Everyone around me has a blank face

 no eyes, ears, nose or mouth.

No emotions show anymore. Not on my face, or yours.

Run farther I do until I find a river made from blood, the question I ask myself is" who's blood is this?"

Is it mine, is it yours or is it the worlds.

Run to find what has gone missing,

I look and see nothing but darkness.

A place with no emotion,

no pain,

no color. A world that has turned from the light to the dark

as I run to find the light,

that I never will find

Author's Note

Yea I know it's a very dark piece of writing

Reviews

[Haunzwürthe]

A world without color needs and artist, a world in darkness needs a fire. You are an artist with a match. Yeah, the content is dark and ominous, but we have all been there. I think you could look at the structure and line breaks in order to put more emphasis on key phrases. This is a really good piece!