No Need and Need

No Need and Need

A Poem by Krista

L ove me,

 

none for roses,

none for money,

none for diamonds or jewelry

just care for me,

love me as I do you.

No need for anything more,

don't want you for your money,

don't want you for the roses

Only want you for the love you give me

© 2009 Krista


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Maybe if I changed it up some?

Let me think about it and I will do so.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I liked the 'none for' parts but I feel this piece is just too expected in the end.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Krista
Krista

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My name is Krista. I'm 27 years old. I have an eating disorder and am a cutter. I'm also depressed most of the time a very negative out look on life. more..

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