LIfe

Sad,depressing

Life is solitude
Lone am I
why live alone
why live in pain?
try sucicide,
is not for me or you
So we continue the best we can
Continue in pain,
in misery,
in sadness
Continue for something
What something?
Is there a something to continue for?

Reviews

[Dimples87]

I love the format of this poem. It tells a truth that lingers amongst your readers and yet it exposes something that everyone can relate to. Honey, all I have to say is continue on for the truth because you have to find out who you are, where you came from, and the deeper feeling of why your life turned out like it has. Great poem.

[Kelley]

sucicide is never the answer Krista.
And I hope you never even try this.
I'm here for ya when times get rough.
We think that there is no answer
when were down and out but
there always is.

Kelley

[Sarah Buchanan]

Short and interesting. I like how you ask questions in your poetry.