A littlle of my story

All about me. It's both a poem and story

There was once a girl,

a sad sad girl who cried her eyes out.
A girl who was never happy,

a girl who slashed her own wrists once or twice before.

A girl who wished she was dead,

if only because she deserves not to be alive.

There was once a girl,

a sad sad girl,

a girl who got teased so much,

she returned to pain to calm her nerves.

A girl who is so shy,

because of a disablity,

she has no friends.

No friends but 2,

A girl so alone,

that she trusts nobody,

because of the pain she has been through

that is she is in.

There once was a girl,

a girl who wished she was never born,

never born to an abusive home,

cuz she didn't deserve  it.

A girl who never is hungry,

because of a disorder,

that she caused to herself.

A girl who wished she wouldn't be alive anymore

if only because she's blamed for every little thing.

A girl who is broken,

broken into so many pieces,

because of torn heart.

There was once a girl,

a girl who took the world on to herself,

a girl who created a site just for people like her.

A girl who has been through hell and back,

for her friends,

though most are on this site!

A girl who outside of this site,

doesn't belong.

 

Author's Note

I know it's long if it triggered anyone I apoligize. I felt it was time to write this. I also realized I repeated the words A girl alot. I'll work on changing it but for now if any suggestions let me know.
THanks,
Krista

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

There is light after every tunnel.... hope that girl gets the best out of life.... a very well written poem..... but I wish that girl realizes that good do come in life ....

[Chris]

Leave it be as it stands Krista ...it's fine and says what YOU wanted to say. Hi, I'm Chris

[walkingman117]

I like how it reads... I think the use of 'a girl' a lot makes it sound like every girl's -- or everyone's -- story...

[Lucien Maier]

this reads much more like prose than a story. the words are brought together nicely though. Good flow.

[Ruth]

It is hard when we feel we do not belong, again, you are never alone and we ALL have a destiny and mission xox