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i tried to hear your voice in my head
but my memory served me wrong and it came
adrogenous and similar to the self:

stop regreting me
like something you ate,
raw and distaseful
that sat in your intestines
chewed up and hateful
and you continued swallowing
desperate to not be wasteful.
be grateful

that you knew me at all.

Reviews

[Alaska Frost]

Nice write!! i really like how the last line is spaced
"be grateful

that you knew me at all."

it's really cool how you ended the previous stanza/verse (i can never tell which it is) with "be grateful" and then you finish it a few lines down with that GREAT last line!! (i'm stating the obvious)
Very well done!