Upside Down

You said Hello

 

After a long goodbye;

 

Oblivious to the time.

 

 

My mended heart,

 

now fractured again,

 

is bleeding old tears.

 

 

Gone is the urge

 

to remain calm;

 

Falling to pieces again.

 

Those words of mine

 

which caused you anger,

 

Made my life turn.

 

Upside Down.

Reviews

[Adelia Alighieri]

The spacing was too extravagant =P
The rest was elegantly done. Great job.

[Aekmy]

Very simple yet great poem. :D Keep writing. :D