Searching For the Spark

Third poem.

It all begins with a spark, 

A spark that ignites the fire, 

Fire that can light up a world so dark, 

A world so dire. 

Always been an average,

Seeking for the right passage in a world so savage,

The passage that leads to success,

Help  rise above the clouds,

 Clouds of laziness, 

Clouds of selfishness. 

Still searching for the spark, 

The spark needed to make people proud, 

Rise above the clouds and stand out in the crowd,

The spark that will ignite a fire, 

Fire that will  light up a world so dark, 

A world so dire. 

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Everybody struggles when ever they attempt something new. Poems appear easy to do and the easy ones are. But, like everything else in life quality presents itself! A good poem says here I am! We are going to help you get there.
A couple of pointers 1) try to avoid redundancy
2) try to use complete sentences
3) make it easy fore the reader to read and understand your poem
the reader is the final judge of our success or failure at our craft.

[613]

This was written well! My favorite lines: "Always been an average,
Seeking for the right passage in a world so savage". This truly resonated with me. Awesome job.

- Brittney

[Kshitij Gupta]

Thank you :)

[613]

Sure thing.

[Sydney]

I enjoyed this. Very concise statements but to-the-point. Well done

[Kshitij Gupta]

Thank you.

[B]

I found my spark

Good Job !

[Kshitij Gupta]

haha thank you :)