Searching For the Spark

Third poem.

It all begins with a spark, 

A spark that ignites the fire, 

Fire that can light up a world so dark, 

A world so dire. 

Always been an average,

Seeking for the right passage in a world so savage,

The passage that leads to success,

Help  rise above the clouds,

 Clouds of laziness, 

Clouds of selfishness. 

Still searching for the spark, 

The spark needed to make people proud, 

Rise above the clouds and stand out in the crowd,

The spark that will ignite a fire, 

Fire that will  light up a world so dark, 

A world so dire. 

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Everybody struggles when ever they attempt something new. Poems appear easy to do and the easy ones are. But, like everything else in life quality presents itself! A good poem says here I am! We are going to help you get there.
A couple of pointers 1) try to avoid redundancy
2) try to use complete sentences
3) make it easy fore the reader to read and understand your poem
the reader is the final judge of our success or failure at our craft.

[Leo]

very melodic and reads beautifully although the middle stanza went off rhyme it was an extreme delight to read .. I remember reading a quote once, look for that irreplaceable spark and plant it in your system .. wonderful!

[Kshitij Gupta]

Glad you liked it!

[Lydia Shutter]

Everyone wants to be remembered...to be that spark that will make others sit up and take notice. You are trying to inspire with your words....I liked this write. Lydi*

[St.Quin]

A very optimistic view, a spark, imo, means significantly better than the others. A motivational piece with good creativity in it.

[Jane Stones]

I love this!! Especially your second stanza. We are in the same fight here my friend

[Kshitij Gupta]

Hey!
Yeah its one of my favorites too, I hate being an average at everything tbh.
Haha glad to know I'm not alone thanks :)

[Avinash]

Find yourself and you would find everything.

[Confuser]

Kshitij: I enjoyed the poem! Trying to find a way to make a change is the world today is gracefully expressed in this poem. We all have obstacles and must continue to strive to find that "spark" to make the change in our life or in others. All in all, I think you did a wonderful job. If you're new to poetry (saw third poem), you must continue. Maybe the format isn't perfect, but I have many poems I need to rework. You have talent that's for sure and I appreciate the opportunity to read it. It is uplifting and real. Thank you so much....Dale

[KanaDream]

I like how this shows that everyone is looking for a special purpose or starter that will make a change. Very nicely written. ^^ Keep Dreaming.

[Larry Davis]

this is a beautiful poem

[Larry Davis]

this is a beautiful poem

[Larry Davis]

this is a beautiful poem