All these things

It hard to make some-one see if they are blinded by anger

You can trust me,

please believe me

 

I love you, do you see it

I care about you,

do you feel it

All these things are part of what I am offering you

I don’t mean to hurt you,

so when I do remember i'm just a mere mortal

 

Reviews

[Erotic Druid]

very good!! heart felt and honest.

Druid

[Carmalou]

Like in the other poem I read there is a lot of emotion. I like that it's almost dialogue, I also enjoy the last line, 'mere mortal'.
Continue writing!