What i am left with

What i am left with

A Poem by kryptonite911
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Moving too fast

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I jumped before I looked
I talked before I thought
I wanted before I needed
I took before I asked
Now I am left with
Nothing to look at
Nothing to need
Nothing to ask
and no-one to tell
 

© 2008 kryptonite911


Author's Note

kryptonite911
therapy at work

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so sad! then again there are times in life that you need to take what you want enjoy it while it lasts and face what ever comes of it.

nice heart felt write.

Druid

Posted 15 Years Ago


There is a lot of unexplored depth here. Expand on the emotions.

Posted 15 Years Ago


not to shabby! deep and thought provoking! i like this one!

Blessed be!!
Fallon

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow!! That was nice.!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am a virgin to writting, I am using this as a release to get through a few things, and seems to be what works for me, if you like what I have written please tell me, but be gentle until i find my fe.. more..

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