time frame

time frame

A Poem by carmz
"

" this is something to be reflected on"

"
as days goes by
as nights pass us by
changes wake up our mind

change is constant
technology makes our lives instant
and i hope no one will be a peasant

this earth make things real
that's why life is full of trill
and this world is more than a spinning wheel

as the earth evolved
new generation is mold
should we make this earth bold?

we know this is our quest
but i hope this will serve as a test
and our DEAREST GOD will take care of the rest


© 2010 carmz


Author's Note

carmz
im speechless ..............

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It leaves me thinking...... perhaps about the purpose of our being on earth. nice work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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