what a mistake

what a mistake

A Poem by carmz
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"sometimes we need to learn our own lessons without the aid of our mentors but with the aid of our personal experience"

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i came to realize a mistake i have done
but,but its too late to run
what shall i do now?will i throw a can?
or will a talk to that man?

i know its my fault
i feel my life is just a gulf
but i dream to be in the world of WoF
but not to live with a wolf

they say honesty is the best policy
now i know and now i see
what the saying means to me
i just realized I'm not that holy

© 2010 carmz


Author's Note

carmz
wheeee............... life have full of unknown........................

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The problem with lies and stories. There will twist us up and we will need more lies till one day we won't know the truth from a lie. I like this poem. Many good questions are brought out. Better to be honest and maybe a better ending to the problems of living. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yeah, I like that last verse. It's really tight, witty, and well-put.

Not sure I understand the midlle section though. Is 'golf' meant to be 'gulf'? What is 'WoF'?

Posted 14 Years Ago


huh, im soooo sad because of what i have done..but i hope he'll forgive me for that thing,,, its not bad as i think it was.......

Posted 14 Years Ago



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